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I Dream Of Abbadon

🕑 Added 2019-06-13 03:35:48 +0000 UTC
I Dream Of Abbadon

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Balthazar

This is superb. Only found 6/7 endings, but it hits a lot of my buttons. I would suggest that rather than having the demon dress masculine, putting her in 1950s femme gear, New Look dresses and a June Cleaver vibe, would be sexier. Also, I'd love to do a pass through it, adding 50s-sitcom-style slapstick bits or groaner gags to each course of action, thus underlining the theme.

smack54

Figured out all the endings. Really enjoyed the writing here. I know this is a one off project but in the "better" endings it would be neat to be able to ask for a harsher punishment (funishment),just my two cents. Still a well used hour of my time.


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