Leak [Short movie] Sketch
🕑 Added 2019-05-12 20:15:49 +0000 UTCEhhh.... At the start I wanted to make just something short and cute... And I've ended up with this ^^'''
Now to lines! And you, please enjoy! :P Full composed sketch in ATTACH!
PS. To remove nosebleed or not? Cant decide!! >.<'''
PPS. Thanx for all the names suggestions! I've ended up with Rouen(Rou) and Elizabeth (Lis) <3
Comments
Nikk
Not a fan of nose bleed personally but you do what you feel like. I'll take it or leave it.
Meredith Morgana
This one's gonna be good when it's done!
Eipril
Note me please if you have dialogue fix suggestions! ^^
Vyprae
I'm crying xD
That guy
She looks cute
William Noble
I think the nosebleed is a little much. Maybe more of a shock expression. Also I would love to see this with voice actors.
Richard Awesome
Pretty great. ^^ Some of the dialogue could use a little work but it's a fine start. Excited to see more!
Kaizer
Nosebleed is fine
Jasper
i say remove the nosebleed but everything else looks fantastic!
st
nosebleed sucks really
HOWiGOTtheSCARS
Wow, this looks great!
Dandorian
I really enjoyed it! Don't see any reason to not have the nosebleed. But I never was a fan of the nosebleed anyway so I can take it or leave it. I'm excited to see the finished product and hope to see a sequel with these two.
LeGourmet
Really nice! I dont mind the nosebleed. Just do it like you feel it should be.
Rox79
I think it's great so far and can't wait for the finished animation. I don't mind the nosebleed since it's a typical anime thing when a guy sees a hot girl. It won't bother me if you keep it or remove it.
Skeleton Man
This is really nice!!! I think that the nose bleed is an integral part of the scene. Everything is so cute :3
Todesspiel
This looks amazing so far! Can't wait to see how it turns out
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Kimio
I adore it, and AAAAAAAH I'm so happy a name I suggested was chosen :D
DohnJohn FlibberSchnidt
Haha this is great i love the expressions so much on them and her reaction to the "leak" was great! :3
Nikita Anokhin
It’s perfet, as always. About bleeding i think it should be removed
Zhet
The ending is so good! I'd personally drop the nosebleed >w>
Eipril
TELL ME PLEASE WHAT DO YOU THINK