Ace, Act 1 [Storyboard]
🕑 Added 2020-11-14 12:26:39 +0000 UTCI've prepared it some time ago but was not brave enough to post it. I cant hide it any longer so today is the day to actually show you some story sketches xD
Does this intro looks too weird/sad/cringe? I was preparing the text and story for a pretty long time, so I dont know if it is just me after working on it for a such long time or is it really... umm... too much? Id gladly have your feedback thoughts on this ^^
Voice is sketch and some animations will be improved.
This whole animation will have 4 acts. Overall might go up to 6-7 minutes long. I've finished most of early production now, drawing all raw animations and I hope to start linework this month ^^
Also I'll try to finish one of the actually love scenes for you this month.
I really want to hide now xDDD
Comments
I think it looks great!! Nothing seems sad to me!!
Chris T
Really can't wait for this to be finished. Yu is super hot already!
yup
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nah its not cringe its great.
dragongodXD
aww, its cute. =3=
Wolfang95
What do u mean voice is sketch and what is is cringe???
This looks like it's going to be awesome, I'm so excited to see the finished product!
NakatoAvocato
It looks nice
VIRTUSxix
Super excited to see it finished!
Soul Group 2.0
at this point, it looks nice to me.
LegendEW
Amazing ! keep it up
Dymitr
Love the earnest emotion. As an intro, it is quite intense and builds up a lot of expectation. I'm very eager to see the rest.
Kuro Okami
That is really adorable 😍
Mr.E
look great can not wait until it done
Maplehawk
It looks amazing! I can’t wait till you finish it!
Rox79
This is looking good so far. Can't wait to see more.
Seth Corzantes
Keep it up, im loving how its coming so far.
Richard Awesome
This is really ambitious and I like your progress on it. ^^
I need thiss in my life!!!
SwiftKitten
this is amazing!! definitely keep doing it!!!
Dandorian
Looks great! Keep it up.
Avisend
its adorable! I hope you continue it
Relentless
This looks so fun! They look cute, the premis is solid, and I absolutely love volleyball. Her outfit is already wonderful, volleyball uniforms are delightful.
Stop hiding! :V I love it!
Skeleton Man
its looking pretty good, Im looking forward to it!
DK
In a manner of speaking, all storyboards are cringe. Have you ever seen the Finding Nemo or Monster Inc storyboards? This is great, stop questioning yourself and sketch what you see.
Arcturus
Its so awesome! Keep up the good work!!
Rage
I don't see or hear any cringe at all, it's adorable! Can't wait to see more of it!
Awesome!!!!!!!
Localsnep
I like the looks of it I'm very excited for this one after all of the hard work you've been putting into it Keep up the greatness :)