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The Office Party - Alter Ego - Chapter Three

🕑 Added 2021-02-06 13:14:42 +0000 UTC
The Office Party - Alter Ego - Chapter Three

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Julia Miller

Does it really matter at this point? We could figure out that Keith was on his way out from the beginning of the story. Sure I think Grace was behind Keith’s headaches, but it seems to have worked out for both Keith and Kathleen. It will all be about Kathleen from here on out. All Keith has to do is write up the papers for a legal name change and to make sure Kathleen is legal. Keith WANTS to become Kathleen. He will continue on as her. Who would you rather be? Keith, the boring beta male that can’t get a date, or the beautiful Kathleen, who turns heads everywhere she goes?

Julia Miller

Well, if I could have seen this coming, it was obvious. A boring beta male like Keith was going nowhere in the company. It was luck on his part to come up with the idea to create the fabulous Kathleen as a temp, and just in time. Now he can be both the girl of his dreams, with a dream job that he had really wanted, but lacked the confidence to go after. Now Miss Bowen is enamored with the confident and beautiful Kathleen. She was always so cold towards Keith, but as Kathleen it’s a different story. It remains to be seen how their relationship will develop, since Melinda seems to be really attracted to Kathleen. Now if this progresses to the obvious conclusion, Miss Bowen may discover more about Kathleen than she may want to know. It will be up to Kathleen to walk the thin line now, to be friendly with Miss Bowen, but not too friendly, that they may wind up in bed together. I remember one of the earlier stories, the character wore a gaff with a realistic vagina, but I don’t know if that could hold up in very close quarters. It’s interesting to note that Keith had such a bad headache for his interview. I think Grace played a hand in that, with her little pharmacy, since she asked for those pills back, saying Kathleen didn’t need them anymore. Grace has been shaping Keith into Kathleen so well, that you would think she has done this professionally. Even the hormone dosage seems correct, as Kathleen hasn’t had any problems. Now she hasn’t gone to a doctor, just accepting the fact her body has been greatly feminized, and isn’t questioning Grace’s pills or cream or shakes. You can tell, she really wants this, and accepts what is happening totally, if not consciously, subconsciously. Great story Urban! I hope you can write this story to at least 10 chapters. There are a lot of ideas you have put in there already, and you could take this one all the way to Kathleen getting Miss Bowen’s job, when Miss Bowen is promoted into upper management. You have their relationship to explore, you have Grace’s relationship with Kathleen. You have Kathleen navigating how to do a legal name change, and SRS, you have the other males in the department, and maybe one of the upper managers may become interested in Kathleen. Good luck with this one!

Clive hooks

How is Keith feeling about all this, or has the tablets and headaches “killed him”


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