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Working For A Boutique - Part 5

🕑 Added 2021-07-27 10:54:18 +0000 UTC
Working For A Boutique - Part 5
Working For A Boutique - Part 5

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J Chimera

Boy is this poor kid really naive and dumb. You would think by now, after his previous experiences in signing contracts without reading them, he would have learned that doing that always gets him in trouble.

Julia Miller

Well, I think Ms. LaRue realized this as she later adopted Danielle.

Suzy Johnson

After part 6 I stand corrected. My bad.

Suzy Johnson

I have always assumed Danelle (Danny) is in her early twenties or at least 18. Is she not already attending college?

John Ward

Does matter

H J Cihak

There's one huge flaw in the story line. Danny is under 18, and that makes him a minor. Minors cannot sign a legal contract unless it is counter-signed by a parent or guardian. Danny has neither. Since Ms. LaRue knows Danny's age, she has willfully committed a felony. Her crime is technically no different than that of someone who smuggles illegal immigrants only to enslave them as prostitutes.

Julia Miller

My reasoning for Danny not reading any of the contracts was he was a 16 yo boy who was still in shock after watching his home burn down, so he just impulsively signed them, thinking how lucky he was.

Lisa J.

Great job Julia, love this story and you and Urban work so well together. Danielle needs some glasses as he/she signs anything, LOL

Brianna Demonet

Maybe you and Urban can alternate Botique and high school stories. So we get one a day?

Brianna Demonet

I like where your story is headed Julia keep it going.

Julia Miller

I just wanted to leave a quick update. I have finished part 6 of this story and Urban told me she will post it on Friday. However the big news is, Urban recovered the original story that she thought was lost. I now have the original storyline as well. I was looking it over last night, and I think I can adapt most of it to fit within the current story. So there will be a few more parts, some which will become flashbacks that Danny wanted to tell us about, but it seemed to have slipped her mind as she was more interested in talking about Danielle. Alternatively Urban can publish the original storyline and my storyline as an alternative. Which would you rather see?

Leslie Deana

I am happy that this was continued. this has been on my mind for a while, and I wondered what happened to her .

Lajien

When did she do that before?

Brianna Demonet

So far so good Julia. Keep it up. I hope to see much more of both this and Erika. Great job ladies.

Julia Miller

Thanks for the positive comments. I was chatting with Urban about this story a couple of months ago, and asked her why she wasn’t continuing with it. She told me she had felt like she had written that storyline too many times and wasn’t interested in continuing it. Then she said, why don’t you give it a try? I was taken aback and said I would think about it. So Part 5 is my take on her story. She said it’s going in a direction differently from what she would have done, and I appreciate that. I am presently working on a part 6 and we will see what happens to Danielle, since Danny is no more. I don’t think I am as good a writer as Urban, but I will do my best with this story.

Urban

Julia, it's well written and a really very interesting part, Danielle becoming a maid (he should had read the terms and conditions before signing that contract), the plot I had never imagined, unlike me, you have given this story a new dimension. Thank you very much for continuing this story maybe you are a much better writer than me.......

Randy linders

Very good Julia . I look forward to more.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👏🏻💋

Sandi Shore

I wonder how many more girls at the boutique have shared this experience. It would seem to be a rather exquisite club to join. I’d join. Hey, Ms. LaRue, is a great round if FFS going to be included? How about one of those fancy new uterine transplants I hear about? For research, of course. I would love to have my own Ms. LaRue, sans the maid stuff. Just let me be your daughter or protégée. I’ll still curtsie.

Brianna Demonet

Ms La Rue has done this before. Danielle has started a special journey. I woul be willing to bet the condo fire was of Ms La Rue's doing. Enjoy HRT Danielle. You lucky boy you.


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