Rick Scott
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Color rough for book 4!
🕑 Added 2024-09-05 22:28:29 +0000 UTCHey gang,
Got the latest update from my artist. He's incorporated a lot of your feedback to get the image this far. I have a few changes in mind already for the weapons of the characters to give them a more Asian flare. But what do you all think so far? What about the color scheme. Is this the color you'd imagine for a cursed star? Now is the time for changes so let me know your thoughts!
Also, new chapter soon hopefully!
Rick
Comments
evan maples
Now all max needs is a cursed steel super shotgun and he is ready to go but in all seriousness i think you should keep the weapons as is because its a differentiation from other non legionnaire cultivators who use asian style weapons and make the legionnaires on the cover more unique and as for the cursed star it should be more menacing with dark red color spewing out of it like the dark frenzy max usually sees
David
Actually I should say I agree with them all lol. Apparently I can't read or count 😅
David
I definitely agree with the first three. Th sun should be more red; dark red, with the flares actually moving towards black/super deoxygenated blood color
Dark Sky
Very nice! I agree with Rajeev and HeavyArms. If we go with the Blood Moon being blood red colored from the dark frenzy, then in my mind a cursed star would be both blood red while having elements of dark frenzy color patterns incorporated into the stellar mass. I think the menace could be improved by having the stars corona be more radiating outwards (vs. the arcing solar flares), as it makes it seem like it's coming for you more (and is visually cleaner to allow focus on the horde)
Jacob Friebis
I'd imagine more of a red with like tendrils of black.
Rajeev Roy
The red hue is too much fiery not enough horror red
Heavyarms670
I like it , but I was imagining more of a Blood Red Hue for the cursed star. Like that the Horde looks menacing
