Gritzmo
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First-Person Stories
🕑 Added 2023-09-01 04:34:25 +0000 UTCIn an effort to try write more, I'm going to be writing two stories featuring Toriel and Himiko Toga. The twist being that, instead of Damien, YOU will be the main character.
The idea is that I'll be writing it from a first-person perspective. The character will be a generic base character that supposed to represent the audience. Think something like this for reference:
https://dthezntil550i.cloudfront.net/yd/latest/yd1707181922474520002784588/1280_960/f3831778-589b-4c72-8acb-51558b43314c.png [Not made by me. Original artist is unknown.]
Each page will have a panel/drawing attached to it with text underneath telling you what's happening. I'm also planning including multiple choices as well. Kind of a choose-own-adventure.
I'll be working on it on and off in between drawings. On days where you don't see any new drawings posted, expect an update on one of these stories.
Also, I turned on comments in the Google Doc, so if there's any changes. ideas, corrections that you'd like to make, feel free to suggest it! I'll even credit you for your contributions. :)
Himiko Toga:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sPHa8uNAOTkd_-120dZuIDCBGFpHYpyZmEmfIk8H2v8/edit?usp=sharing
Toriel:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iwrLL38YXt4rCMFC-_ecgmZjYsDP6O_y4E00q2ZIrMQ/edit?usp=sharing
T-Rex: [Not working on this atm, but might return to it]:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YKieSCZBgdwtTmW7yXtytM-WcDoSEXj0Pj0AmKDaF5k/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Joe
No worries ^^ i just like tryna help
No worries! I liked your input, but I decided to go in a different direction. I made changes to the dialogue if you'd like to check it out. Nonetheless, I appreciate your contribution. :)
Joe
I tried to add to the toriel story but for some reason it was super unresponsive and laggy so I'm sorry if what I did was just..bad XD
Joe
Imma enjoy reading these. I just know it X3
