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Caught in Her Web - Chapter 03

🕑 Added 2023-04-21 21:58:40 +0000 UTC

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Ike Vann

Alright, I can't wait to see what else he's invented. I have to admit, it's honestly good to see Peter as a genius scientist instead of a super hero, even if it's only in stories like this.

hugplx

Pete wasn't wheelchair bound, he 'walked' everywhere, he just didn't have full control of his legs. They were stiff, caused him pain and awkward. I also didn't want to deal with a long rehab in a story like this - move on etc. That giving himself superpowers thing is a nod to the Spider Gwen comic. Pete did that and turned himself in the Lizard, and Gwen accidentally killed him. It also doesn't seem particularly smart to mess with your own DNA when you're a child, I reckon. Pete's so OTT smart and his inventions so OP in this story that he already is a superhero imo. He MADE Venom, and a bunch of other things to come.

hugplx

I thought about it. Having it gain sapience and also have the hots for Pete (a semblance of that plot in the story still remains - it's why Gwen sometimes calls Pete 'Daddy'), but ultimately I figured it detracted too much from what I'm doing. These stories are mostly smut vignettes with traces of plot tying them together and grounding them. I may write a story one day that's, like, 90% story 10% smut, but that's not this.

Ike Vann

It seems a little to soon for Peter to be able to walk without using his crutches. I mean, his legs should still be weak and atrophied. So how is he moving so well already? Also, what was his reason for not using super powers to regain the use of his legs? He said something about it being a bad idea after some thought. What made ot seem like is was?

Ike Vann

So Peter essentially made Gwen a nanotech version of a symbiote? Hopefully it doesn't gain a will of its own and goes out of control.

Ike Vann

Another great chapter. I can hardly wait for the next update.


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