SOBORO
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katarin_story4_26~32
🕑 Added 2024-11-24 09:54:39 +0000 UTChttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1oHFP1JhpliW67v3T-ZtIGOOaNtB0DW-M?usp=drive_link
Katarin's story has finally come to an end.
Now I'm going to start working on Triss' story.
Comments
alzm54
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荷趣
i tink the skin is too clean,more dirty thing maybe better
SOBORO
I modified it to reflect your opinion.
SOBORO
I modified it to reflect your opinion.
用户7512050851
In the last picture, top of her head looks a bit strange.
SevenDeadLeeSins
I think these text changes would be good: 21: "chuckled and gestured and they" -> "chuckled. As he gestured they" 23: ... It continued to arouse them. 24: I would leave out the ",who had been away," 29: Maybe change "Then she forced ... 3 Gold" -> "3 gold and im yours" she said timidly. Im already excited for the next part!
clibanarii123
Yay, a Tzeentchian cultist at the end. :3
nieverter
Prprpr~
