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Godfather's System 110

🕑 Added 2023-08-26 16:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Agoraphobic Dragon

I'm in the process of talking with an editor - as I'm somehow blind when it comes to fix my own writing for mistakes like that.

EsZeus

You mixed up her/he/his a lot at the start of this chapter. Generally, you need proofreading. A lot xD in all the chapters until now there were a lot of issues with grammar^^ Luckily, I am used to that and it's easily fixable with proofreading. From yourself or a proofreader :)

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! I'm surprised that he didn't ask if he missed any:-)


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