Malcolm Tent
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Call of the Void chapter 28
🕑 Added 2026-01-29 17:38:59 +0000 UTC
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Malcolm Tent
Well sure, but thats because Kai is an SI. Leon is a native of DC hes just an original character. The butterfly thing doesn't work as well for him.
Zerak
The way of introducing more adversary based on the butterfly effect of him derailing canon in this story is flowing a lot better that the latest DC fic where the MC’ main opposition is his grandfather, which felt forced into that position.
MyAfroAteMyDog
My guy is is cursed Kisame and Itachi. Guy can take Kisame. Maybe he can blackmail itachi into leaving. Say he knows he’s a secret spy for konoha
Son-Of-Scorn
I like it, I do hope Itachi doesn't turn up just yet, maybe Kisame can sprinkle some bits of foreshadowing but otherwise it would feel a little too much, I am curious how the Harpoon will stake up against Kisame because doubtlessly they'll fight for a scene or two, don't think he'd win obviously
Armand Sellier
Does he want cry of the phoenix to deal with Haku's mirrors? this story is going strong. I'm desperetly waiting for more. I love it.
