James Maliszewski
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The Secrets of sha-Arthan?
🕑 Added 2021-09-17 00:50:32 +0000 UTCI'm trying out alternate titles and this struck me as one to consider, given its alliteration. Any thoughts?
I'm far from committed to changing the name, but it's a possibility I keep thinking about and this one seemed more promising than previous ones.
Comments
James Maliszewski
One of my current concerns is that, while the vaults are a big part of the setting, one might get the false impression that exploring them was all one could do in it. Like the dungeons of D&D or the underworlds of EPT, the vaults are simply one aspect of the setting, albeit an important one. But, as I said, I'm not committed to a title change by any means.
Stephen Wendell
I like “Secrets” a little more. In addition to alliteration, it implies discovery where “Vaults” is a little vague on that point and implies (for me) treasure more than anything else. Consider dropping the article? “Secrets of sha-Arthan”
Stephen Vossler
From what you have said the "Vaults" are an integral part of the adventures. I would concur with sticking with "Vaults of sha-Arthán".
