James Maliszewski
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Feedback on the Character Classes Draft
🕑 Added 2023-05-15 18:59:29 +0000 UTCI would very much like to receive your feedback on the latest draft of the character classes chapter for Secrets of sha-Arthan. In order to make this easier for me, I would like to ask that you send your feedback to me via email to the following address: jdmaliszewski@gmail.com. It would also make things simpler for me if you could make the subject of your email(s) "Chapter 3 Feedback." You are also welcome to use the Discord channel "sha-Arthan Previews" for discussion, but I prefer emails for this purpose.
Additionally, I want you to be aware of the following:
1. Since this chapter exists in isolation at the moment, some details of how its rules work in conjunction with the game as a whole will be unclear.
2. Therefore, I'd suggest that you focus your feedback/comments primarily to what's in the draft chapter. If you have larger questions, try to hold on to them until after I have more drafts to share (which should be soon).
3. Pointing out grammatical or typographical errors is welcome and encouraged. Likewise, if the text is unclear on some point, please let me know. Bear in mind that some ambiguities are intentional, in the sense that I leave room for interpretation by individual referees. That said, it never hurts to point out things that don't make sense to you.
4. One area I'd very much like feedback is on the matter of adept disciplines. In particular, do you think they should get full write-ups like spells (and thus be moved to a different chapter) or do you prefer the shorter write-ups?
I'll undoubtedly have more to say on this topic as more drafts become available and we get closer to a wider playtesting of the material. I feel that playtesting will reveal much more about what works and what does not than simple reading of the drafts. Nevertheless, I appreciate any feedback you have to share.
Thanks!
