James Maliszewski
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Friday Feature: Revised Sorcery Preview
🕑 Added 2023-05-26 16:54:04 +0000 UTCWork on the revised drafts of Secrets of sha-Arthan continues at a solid pace. While I might not yet quite make my self-imposed deadline of the end of this month to complete the revisions of the player-oriented material, I do feel confident that I'll certainly have the revision of the equipment and vehicles chapter by next weekend – close enough!
For now, though, what I want to share is the revised draft of the sorcery chapter. This one includes a fair bit of new material, as well as lots of rewrites, tweaks, and clarifications. Because it is a bit more complicated than previous drafts, there will undoubtedly be more errors and ambiguities. Please bear that in mind as you read through it.
Here's the link to the draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1g8Snaydi_bqpe1mvCn7Z2qXFDsi921yg/view?usp=sharing
As with previous drafts, if you have any feedback, please follow the format laid down on this post, calling the emails "Chapter 4 Feedback."
Thanks!
