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24/08 Commission #7

🕑 Added 2024-09-01 12:09:13 +0000 UTC

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Jokerthejester

Oh it's fine to me, I just like to help with translating for non American native people, I've helped one with it before, you have me added on Discord, if you ever need me to help you out translating feel free to just drop an image in and I'll work my magic for you for free

Fermus Boi

omg I didn't even notice the errors xD (even my client too) bad news is that I didn't save the layers of those texts, thought everything's okay ;w; I'll upload textless versions instead if that's okay ;w; sry for the troubles

Galdra_Absol

Gorgeous, your Absol is a pretty male~

Jokerthejester

Rest of it looks clear though

Jokerthejester

For the first page, the text for them saying "cuite" should be retranslated to "cutie" For the last page, the text for them saying "it's been a while isn't it?" should be retranslated to "it's been awhile, hasn't it?" and "I'll feed you until you couldn't take it anymore" should be retranslated to "I'll feed(or fill optionally, depends on what they wanted) you until you can't take it anymore" sorry, you didn't ask for this but I just felt like potentially helping straighten out a little