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Night Games 1st page and a lot of text
🕑 Added 2016-09-14 13:42:10 +0000 UTC Suddenly first page arrive! )I didn't posted line art stage because first page were basically a test field and sustain several changes. For forthcoming pages I would drop some WiP.
It is not a final version - later, when a comics would be almost ready, I would go through all previous pages searching for things to fix. Then i also would drop a High res and all that stuff.
And some current info on project:
-estimated length would be around 10-12 pages, maybe even more. Originally i planned on around nine, but since then I decided that I should draw less crumbled pages , so the number rise a little.
-since it's a lot of a pages, i maybe would split this into two, take a break in the middle, draw some normal pictures and all that stuff. Depends on how tired of this I would be (i don't like to drew same thing for too long).
-as i said before we already established a basic scenario + I have a framing and text for three next pages, and a vision on what to do for rest.
-style slightly changed from previous 4 pages, become a bit more realistic. But not completely realistic, since it wouldn't fit the overall silly tone.
-first 4-6 pages would be given in sacrifice to a story (previous comics ended with too much contenders for one Kitty), then lewd part will start
Comments
SanePerson
Thanks for pointing out! Fixed.
EdTheRabbit
After 'Limbo-bibmo' was fixed, it now looks like something else has changed - the line on panel 4 "...And you spent *how many* of them in another dimension again..." -there's no time period referenced earlier, so it doesn't make sense anymore. How about changing "i've known her longer than you have..." to "I've known her *years* longer than you have..." Sorry for being picky, I'm loving the continuing story.
Aidenke
I may be a little biased, but this first page looks great. Kitty's body and the ropes look incredible, some great expressions - heck of a lot to like here! :)
Amazing work
SanePerson
That was the plan. And it's not accidental, though Aidenke is the one responsible for dialogs ) I can't write good dialog in English. And if you, or somebody else, have a suggestion to change something - write and we sincerely take note
Leonineus
Remember to distribute the high-res versions of these when they're done! Also you accidentally put "Limbo-bibmo" in Rachel's speech bubble in the middle panel.
David N
I love your work. You kick ass!
s22132
Looking really good so far.
