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Third page line art
🕑 Added 2016-10-10 14:35:57 +0000 UTC I'm back on track, colors will be pretty soon.Laura's design differ from previous page, i will fix it (2nd page) later.
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Second of Many
Continues to look great, and looking forward to seeing what happens next. Love the reason Laura has got involved. I really, really love the bottom, setting up the fight. Especially the choice to have Kitty in the middle, bridging the panels. Though would it be possible to shift the gutter that bisects the panel slightly so it is more obvious that it comes doesn't stop when it hits Kitty, but goes past? Maybe colour would make it more obvious, but between Kitty's location on the panel and the VS, the bottom half of the gutter isn't immediately obvious and makes the panel look slightly off at first glance . Other than that, looks amazing
s22132
Ah, so that's why Laura grabbed her. That's actually a fairly reasonable conclusion to come to, particularly given Laura's past and training. Heh, Kitty looks so done with everything in that last panel.
