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Night Games 4th page
🕑 Added 2016-11-15 10:46:25 +0000 UTC If you miss the announcement - go there, it's importantColors arrive! I feel like i spend on this page more time then on previous three combined. It is probably false, though. Or not... But anyway, now that girls are split up on pairs, time to some action )
Some changes in text from line art version, mostly in the header (aidenke didn't liked my 4th wall breaking) and 5th panel (i didn't liked aidenkes initial dialogs)
Also if you didn't vote in the last poll yet - do it , since it's a huge poll and i need as many votes as possible
Comments
SanePerson
Aside from Kitty posses, Laura's faces is the most fun thing to draw from this and previous panels ) The fact that she is my favorite character out of this four is shine a little )
SanePerson
will be strange if this newbie were the one to tie Rachel ) And Rachel with her outfit don't look as sub at all ) There will be little twist with her, but again - don't expect full view of Laura session - it will require separate comics to draw
SanePerson
Hey, you know where it is going ;)
Leonineus
I love that you can see Laura's brain in that last panel going "This miiiiiiight have been a mistake..."
I LOVE it. I'm sure this will be... therapeutic... for Laura. (She's the sub, right? Tell me she's the sub! Or perhaps both?)
Aidenke
I'm biased - I love how the page turned out. The girls all look awesome, and the real fun is in all of the expressiveness around the page. From Kitty "lecturing" Magik in the background of panel 1 to Laura's dubiousness about trying this stuff and having it be fun... A great page, and can't wait to see where things go from here! :)
SanePerson
Every time i doesn't like something ) I'm perfectionist in a bad way, can spend a lot of effort on insignificant details. Though, when it commission or request i'm usually consult changes with other side
kou32
This is a great piece, the colors are very vibrant. I'm curious, how often do you change things, from what was originally requested/commissioned
SanePerson
There will be X-23 in bondage for 1-2 pages, yeah. And thank you for pointing out my mistake, fixed )
s22132
Love the colors, makes the page look even better. I do hope we get to see at least a little of X-23 in bondage. Also, the link to the poll isn't working for me.
