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Action Toys bonus + updates on pages 10-12
🕑 Added 2023-04-17 15:59:13 +0000 UTCBy popular (one) demand - Raven in her chair without Control Freak + version with her not cosplaying Wednesday.
Also - page 10 , page 11 and page 12 got masive edits, mainly on girls faces (eyes and noses); also I decided to slightly change how I drew StarFire bang; redraw Raven's legs and ass in chair panel; and tone down TV effect (it looks more distracting outside of Patreon picture-viewer) + some minor fixes.
I think this 3 pages looks much better now, and can be considerate a final versions - if I donβt suddenly feel like spending another day editing.
All pages have previous versions included, so you can compare them
Page 13 in a process, half-way drawn
Comments
Vysirez
There are both absolutely spectacular. Have I mentioned I love your art?
sweet sweet bonus
The Mu
No complaints here π
TheGag
I am in favor of the changes! βπ They look less cartoonish, and it does improve the proportions (e.g., Starfire's eyes on page 10, or the faces with the eye-nose ratio). Great job, Sane!! P.S.: I liked the non-Wednesday version of Raven too! Thanks to Shremedy for being that "unwitting hero" who gave the idea! π
