SanePerson
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Action Toys page 15
🕑 Added 2023-06-04 13:26:34 +0000 UTCGirl winning streak is coming to an end.
Page 14 is also changed, I rewrote the "muzzle" line to better fit the final result on this page + some minor art changes everywhere. Like usual, previous version is also there, so you can compare changes.
Next 2 pages is dialogue heavy, similar to page 14. Due to design reasons, I will need to start drawing page 17 first and 16 later, so they both will be done later then usuall, but close to each other. Probably will finish Watch Party before finishing them both.
But first, bottom row of this page gave a very stupid idea - and as we all know it's the best kind of ideas - so I need to quick-draw it immediately =)
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Reminder to not post my patreon exclusive pages outside, since they not fucking finished yet, and I may change things later, both in text and in art. Some assholes continue to do that and now there are a lot of Action Toys galleries with outdated pages on the internet. I will start to label them with big WiP texts, but will start from next page, since I gonna post 13-15 outside soon anyway.
Comments
Shremedy
I wouldn't have stopped the spanking entirely; long pauses between while the vibes warned them up, then pick up the pace according to how they react. Kori would probably be getting 2-3 swats for every 1 of Raven's, but even after 4h not back up to original pace. More to surprise and shock and keep off-balance mentally
IvyReed
Raven's mere mortality is getting the better of her, meanwhile Starfires, alien physique means Robin has a LOT of homework to do to keep her happy in the future.
Not
I think Starfire is still winning. Raven, not so much.
SanePerson
art tweaks is not leading anywhere, I simply think of a new thing to add and draw them.
Shremedy
I have a guess where the latest art tweak is leading. It's a stupid idea, Sane, and I'm glad you're going with it. π
The Phoenix King
Raven is so gorgeous here, particularly that close-up panel. Excellent work!
Samantha Updegraff
I lile that star has little sparks in her eyes. Nice touch
the lines on the butts are a little weird, but other than that amazing page. I really love ravens face in this one and how exhausted she looks.
JCK
I never understood why people do that. You are actually pretty generous in that you post it outside in a timely manner.
SanePerson
oh, for fuck sake! Some little bitch already posted this outside. Well, I tried, but WiP text for half the page it is from now on.
Morgan Carige
cf NEEDS to get a few photos of those o faces for when the girls escape (and they will)
tripalloca
this series is going great to greater, I love Raven's horny face, too exciting.
Second of Many
Another sexy page! Love their expressions at the bottom, especially just how disheveled Raven looks. Looks utterly overwhelmed and certainly no longer winning
SanePerson
stamina, experience and self-control )
Trevor Bond
A matter of stamina eh?
The Mu
Wow, four hours really did a number on Raven π
The Cad
Nice!. Ref folk here that are reposting β¦ why??
