Action Toys page 18

SanePerson

it's not a link, it's a tag. Either copy it and put into your browser, or click on it and scroll way down to the bottom post - link will be in it.

i just get back to the patreon site when i click the link...?

SanePerson

yes, gonna draw them all first, then do another round on each of them fixing mistakes, before calling them final. Three pages left from part 2 including 19th I currently working on. And there will be more animated pages, but I gonna animate only pages that really worth it, so mainly animation will be in part 3 where the most sex scenes will be. Maybe page 21 will be animated too, i'm not decided yet

Zillavader

So I’m confused, are you going to finish making them first and then come back to touch up on them? Or are you going to do the current page, then finish up the touch up afterwards? Also, are you going to do morning those animated pages and such, or was that a one time thing? Keep up the amazing work.👍🏻👍🏻

Second of Many

I can see what you mean about the visual flow - really strong visual storytelling here. Another fun page

SanePerson

Hm. Good idea, I'll try how it will look.

Shremedy

The one little thing I'd do differently, and this is VERY minor, would be to use a spiky or rough-edged font for the sound effects of the "toys" at work in punishment mode as opposed to reward mode.

SanePerson

It's also the only one that sounds normal. I were thinking on using batmanium for comedic effect, but decided to not to, since reader may think that I came up with this word)

Floyd Bristol

I did get all three attachments (16, 17, 18) at the bottom of the email. But that was after I went on the easter egg hunt on the patreon page, that was fun!

IvyReed

Well that'll be a mite difficult considering their bondage.

s22132

Another great page. :)

Xianroberts

Also I am loving the control collars idea! Maybe instead of sexual acts the girls could be made to give foot massages or shoulder rubs.

Xianroberts

I love the nod to promethium DCs adamantium. It shows the author really is a fan

JoeForest

The new page is excellent! And I'm loving the *conditioning* that these girls are going for - I adore how you draw Raven especially, but they both look delectable. Excited to see how it develops!

lightning blue

Turns out I’m just dumb, if you follow the instructions and go to the bottom of the page you will find the link

lightning blue

It might just be that I’m being dumb, but I can’t find it

kou32

They are

George

Perspective is *chef’s kiss*

SanePerson

shit, I forgot that I wanted to simply write a link in the mail version -_- But pages that i attached should still be downloadable.

kou32

Do, didn't get it in the mail. Had to click the tag link and scroll still I found the direct link.

Deviantmaster222

God how do you blow my mind every time you update? Those eyes are divine

SanePerson

you didn't get the pictures in the mail? (asking from the tester perspective)

kou32

took a little hunting but found it, love the jojo refence and the expression work