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13 - Thrill

🕑 Added 2023-09-20 09:49:13 +0000 UTC

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Haylock Jobson

I hate when I accidentally reveal how dumb I can truly be. Thanks for the heads up, haha.

Joe

"Like a slingshot, she launched Rocky perpendicular to the ocean's surface. He didn't lose height for a long moment, but then he dipped rapidly. He skipped across the water like a flat stone, getting smaller and smaller as he bounced out toward the horizon." I was just wondering if you ment paralell rather then perpendicular, i think perpendicular is like this: + , and paralell is like this: =====

Haylock Jobson

Thank you - this is fantastic feedback, and I'll adjust the chapter. Total oversight on my part.

Sebastian Prue

A bit odd that she knows how to swim, if taking from water is heretical and the locals don't do anything with water where'd she learn to swim?


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