kennoarkkan
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AH38 p4 is up, what's next?
🕑 Added 2024-06-21 21:50:24 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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Kenno Arkkan
that does make sense :o We can also do the "soph tries to sleep but there's sex happening all around her" bit on this first night as well, more foreshadowing.
Will Feral
CALLING AN AUDIBLE I'm assuming she got booked into jail at night since the lights were on, so it might be better for a "normal" first night where nothing happens, then the next day we get a quick panel showing what goes on in the showers (top 10 anime foreshadowing) and she gets propositioned after breakfast instead
Kenno Arkkan
Next page should be Soph walking into the dining area, only to be approached by swift and eclair, who wanna have a go at the fresh meat that just arrived at the jail. That's when Ollie and Sharon would sweep in and stand up for her. Back at her cell, Ollie and sharon would offer joining rapid 69 for her protection, but Soph declines, not wanting to be involved in gang business. The page could end with it being night time and the lights going off, as Soph tries to sleep, moaning and slushing sounds would keep her awake, arousing soph.
