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Chapter 565 - Chen Shi

🕑 Added 2025-10-19 21:38:30 +0000 UTC

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Ezy

Thank you so much for reading~! ^-^ It's possible, but I can't think of how to improve it, so I will keep it as is >.< But yeah, probably that >.<

Michael Zinkstein

Thanks for the chapter. It doesn’t feel right you say… my guess is would be either the treasure part or maybe not enough Aiko shenanigans? That’s only thing I could think of. But it is still all right in my eyes.

Ezy

Thank you~! ^-^ Yep, it will be fun~ >:)

Peytochip

Luna: Is a good chapter. And Chen Shi, you moron, you don’t understand the Chaos you’ve let into your home.

CringeWorthyStudios

So, here's the deal guys. I have rewritten this chapter 3 times now and I'm a bit tired of it, but it still doesn't feel right. > I agree that something about it doesn’t feel perfect but there’s also nothing wrong and I have no idea what could be improved. I’d say 9/10 and we’re all just used to your work being 11/10. Basically this is still fine and you’re just worrying too much. You can always come back later if it’s still a concern but I think you’re overthinking it. Love your writing as usual. :) Thanks for the chapter~!

Stway

I think this chapter is good. Gives a lot more insight into Yue's situation, also.


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