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The Northern Tyrant [Game of Thrones] Chapter 28 - Mines, Trust, Struggles & Submission

🕑 Added 2025-10-24 20:51:56 +0000 UTC

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Corvus

I think the former queen would have guilt over drinking the moon tea back then and bearing Aerys another child, instead of Wylis

Владислав Форманюк

Wylis needs to start a large-scale project that requires a lot of low-skilled labor. For example, design a dam and begin its construction on a tributary of the main river. Work, food, and payment. This will solve several problems. He'll obtain a power source. Create an artificial stream for water wheels. Get a reservoir for irrigation. And create publicity for his fief. People will quickly spread the word about Wylis, and many will be drawn to him. And artisans will follow them. And some of them can be recruited into his service.

MrPlotThickens

It's not just about land and such for Wylis. At the moment, Wylis is the smaller guy. Manderly are the hegemon in the region. Considering Tyrant's Squire's ambitions, Wylis is bound to go far beyond what Manderly is. Wylis is happy if his son grows up, meets Manderly's granddaughter, and falls in love. Wylis will happily wed them. But to fix him with a girl when he's just a year old is not good. What happens if Magnus grows up and falls for someone else?

Владислав Форманюк

I wouldn't be so adamant about marrying Magnus to Lord Manderly's granddaughter. After all, the girl is the heir to her house, meaning that through her, Wylis will have the opportunity to annex Manderly's lands. This includes the largest port in the North, a swathe of fertile land, a merchant and naval fleet, and a ton of money. His son will thus have a vast domain in the North, with many men under his command. For now, a simple betrothal could be attempted, with the agreement stipulating a number of concessions and assistance from Manderly to Wylis.

MrPlotThickens

The smut part?

Naruto Uzumaki

Its has too much Ai wording style compared to others chapters. Feels weird

MrPlotThickens

General isn't the official term yet. It'll just Wylis' thought

Ultra_P8

I had a funny idea for future chapters should Wylis daughter come home with a boy and say 'Father this is Sir ____ a man I'm courting.' Wylis on the surface is very kind and charming until he whispers in the poor guys ear saying "Break my daughter's heart and I'll rip yours out with my bare hand."

Sil3nt

TFTC!!

Calvin Ellis

❤️ Thanks for this moment❤️

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Tftc great job

Jacob Weiss

Neeeeeeed mooooore this is BS I want more 😭

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Wylis could have robert put the word out in kingslanding that their are opportunities in ramsgate and since the sack was recent their should be alot of ppl looking for a new start he should also buy the freedom of skilled slaves from essos and give them a choice be dropped off in bravos or settle in ramsgate. And he should free some unsullied to help teach his military.

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He should give those walls a slope it will make them more structurally sound ,more ressistant to earthquakes and the slope will deflect most of the damage from a catapult/trebuchet making those wall pretty much immune to conventional siege weapons only dragons, sapping and explosives could threaten them.

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Wylis needs to do the sewer first before he really begins on the town i would suggest doing it in phases divide the town up into grid squares he should start on the edge of town build a whole new city block from the sewer up then move the ppl in the adjacent block into the new one then tear down the old one and for the new building i would go with the german fachwerk aka half timbered house where the bottom half of the building is stone or brick or he could use roman concrete but he will need to import volcanic sand from either skagos or dragonstone for roman concrete and i would go with copper roofing since it wont rust and it would look unique. Wylis could also make copper pots, pans, cups and silverwhere as well as copper door handles since copper is a natural antibacterial but between this and needing copper to coat the bottom of his ships hulls he will need a lot of copper. He could gild steel plates with copper useing electroplating with simple baghdad batteries which include clay jars water and some copper wire, for bigger objects you would need large clay containers,you could also use this to gild jewelry with gold,silver and platinum quickly and cheaply useing the same method granted you would need to make sure ppl new it was gilded and not solid gold or whatever make sure their are plenty of signs in the shop. Also he could have double layer streets with a second set of streets underground under the surface streets then he could make the surface level foot traffic only make all horses and wagons use the underground streets thus keeping surface street clean of manure and dividing the traffic and in winter the sub streets would always be snow free. He should also lay the ground work for some hidden tunnels out of the city.

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"Chett, Jonos, and Kyle, you three take longswords. Irwim, Jarl, Osmund, and Harold, you’ll do better with short blades and shields. The rest of you, grab spears. They’ll serve you well for keeping foes at a distance." Personally i would have standard kit being a dagger ,a knife, a short sword, then a falchion and whatever primary whether its spear and shield or great axe or great hammer or pike or halberd. And you should give them cleats on their foot wear since that was one of the romans biggest advantages and they need a winter and summer uniform for fighting in the north,south,and essos .

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Wylis acknowledged it and hoped to train Chett into one of his first Generals because Tyrant's Squire dreamed big.  This is just my opinion but i would have gone with marshall and high marshall instead of general.

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So, he initiated a morning routine. Early at dawn, he'd train them personally. Starting with a long, running session, circling the entire town five times. Then some weight training. Finally, training with blunt swords.  i would of said weapons training make sure not to hyper focus swords they need to train in bows,crossbows,spear,polarm,axe,hammer etc they need to know the basics for each weapon then focus on the sword/knife and whatever their primary is gonna be since everyone should have a sword a large knife like a bowie or seax knife with a 10 to 14 inch blade then a dagger with an 8 in blade for killing sentries quitley and cleanly since blades are the easiest melee weapon to carry.

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Wylis should incorperate whistles,bugles and drummers all of these will help with directing men on the battlefield for example the romans used whistles to signal the men to rotate off the front line and 1700,1800s calvary made extensive use of the bugle to give simple orders like fallback or reform the line etc.

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Ned nodded in silence. He had seen the Tyrant of the Trident in action. He could vouch for those stories, and they weren't exaggerated enough. Killing a full-plated knight was a hard job, unless struck in gaps; no blade or arrow could pierce that kind of armor.  this is very true which is why when fighting opponents with such armor you need a hammer,mace,flail or axe. If wylis introduced compound bows/scorpions and reverse compound crossbows with arrows and bolts designed for penetrating armor they will be able to penetrate even full plate especially if the arrow heads are made from high hardness modern steel. He would still need to train his men in the use of normal bows/crossbows in case they needed to use one in a pinch.

Durrandon

Twin sons, from someone of Wylis' size? Anna will never recover.

Smeezy

This story is the best. Love Genna too

Deon Bland

I'm loving the story.I'm looking forward to reading more.I just wish it wasn't one chapter at a time lol.

LordRhyolith

Genna could stay and bring miners to mine and she manages that part. Tywin gets some profit and a connection to the protagonist. Stuff like that

Razvan Peles

Tftc!


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