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Vol. 3 Chap. 57 Happy Wife, Happy Life

🕑 Added 2023-10-30 16:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Ekko

This is so fucked up...Starbrite is like an onion of horror, the more layers you peel, the more fucked up shit you find

Nonnyor Business

Yeah... reading through your comments, my carefully checked over chapters are looking downwright infested with typos. Yeesh. Also, poor Etenesh!

gostsamo

> The only mercy is that the overwhelming majority of them were Level One is/were, so maybe was/were for better grammar experience? > Sooner or later, they would catch something. Then, the net closed in. in this and the following sentences, it feels like that a few "would" are missing. > Letting Etinesh take the lead at times was like getting stabbed for you. if the system makes such mistakes with her name, Truth won't have a peaceful marriage in his future. > he was certain Borges had more security as his place. at his place?

RonGAR

Whoa... Wtf. That was crazy. LOL ------- Well well well. IF Truth could figure a way to 'free the slaves' I have a feeling they would reek all the havoc he is hoping for.

Nonnyor Business

Hell, suburbia, potato, potahto.

Addicted_Reader

A more direct metaphor for hell!


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