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Chapter 44- The Big Brother Type

🕑 Added 2023-04-11 16:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Somathing

Favorite chapter by far. Fun well paced action, and the end is an exciting start to Truth's power scaling (always appreciate a good time jump) and breaking free from Starbrite. Writing is fantastic as always, really like the juxtaposition of his own thoughts, his "Starbrite Man" thoughts, and the System's thoughts, and you weave all that with the action extremely well. Love the overall pacing of the story, you do a great job of using slow chapters to build up to big plot moments like this one. Keep it up!

Lazerus56

Holy mother suck. I mean with the way this story started. Yea hes gotta at least die once if not a few times. I wonder if puppet finger Chan can change or evolve into a more individualized entity. It said it could not and would not, and no one would consider if their own fingers would gain sentience after millenia but shit the system don't make no sense anyway. I'm thinking the system is ensoursled or enslaved and will want our Boi (his body?) to help.

Michael

?!?!?!

gostsamo

Totally not a cliffhanger, the mc is quite oppositely at the bottom of a well and we know that he is already dead. :)

Addicted_Reader

This was an epic prologue. The fact that you did all this instead of shoving it into three paragraphs in chapter one is great.

Baconwargod

Kinda still sucks that truth isn’t able to fight back against the system not gonna lie. Also this felt very…abrupt I know it’s supposed to feel that way but it felt weird I giess

Leaf

I bet the system does body cultivation while he’s dead.

Nonnyor Business

An apt comparison…

Nonnyor Business

I made the channel, now I’m figuring out how to make it useful. Very noob with Discord, but getting help. Rough ETA of Monday.

Deinos

Nice! First time I had an author kill off the protag, although it's probably as lasting as the souls game.

Silveredgallium

Oh man what a chapter, I hope the discord gets made soon

Reis_

What a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read next chapter

JC

I'm really curious what the system actually is and whether it's the same in everyone etc.; really, just how it all works. Sounds as though some answers may be on the horizon!

JohnZ

I am kinda bummed though that System bitch is still in the car, trying to to backseat drive.

BookDragonling

Finally there's some consequences to being stupid and selling yourself to a corporation


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