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Chapter 77 A Hole In The Heart

🕑 Added 2023-05-05 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Novel Cat

Shut up shop keep! 😏 And go Jember go! Lol But that regret he had from the loss of Etenesh's touch is honestly quite sad... Truth needs lovin on All fronts, and I don't care who he gets it from first. That, and I'm personally looking forward to him drowning that emotionally abusive little twat of a "spirit" stuck in him in steaming hot rat piss ... At least long enough for it go cold and REALLY absorb into the little Twat lol. Etenesh and Jember for the Win as his first relationships! Or at least something closer than friends? Truth deserves some pampering after all lol. 😂 Though he'll most likely be worse than a bumbling preteen with everything he's bin through lol.

Josh Cothran

Need moar

Josh Cothran

Like when your girlfriend records the game for you but she doesn’t record it in HD. I feel you bud

gostsamo

Well, if you want another hint, the names of the sibs point to the four cardinal virtues. Sofia -> wisdom, Harmony -> temperance, Vigor -> courage, Truth -> justus. Truth will have to grow to his virtue though, which might be marked by him leaving violence behind, unless it is for the right reasons. Justinian also means a just one in latin, but as the demon said "his vices are rat and envy". In this chapter it seems that he is trying to train our mc into a point and fire weapon which might backfire spectacularly. Hopefully, after Truth loses his virginity with some of the cousins, but I suspect not. Warby is laughing at the moment, but I still don't have the pieces to suspect what is behind Truth's reincarnation. It is likely god, but which aspect of them and for what purpose, I have no idea. He might be the messiah for the ghoul and he might be a the messiah after the lost battle of Siphios when the contract was broken, but I don't have enough data. Will have to catch up on gnosticism on the weekend it seems. PS: the hate of farms might be his previous life where he would've grown on one. At least the prophet was preparing him in a small village.

Nonnyor Business

Thank you very much! That is extremely kind of you to say. Yes, it's meant to build cumulatively, hopefully leading to a big "AHAH!" moment.

Aaron Weingrad

TFTC - really solid work. You have been very good at foreshadowing whatever the mysteries of Truth’s nature and purpose is. I’ve been trying to figure out the shape of things from the breadcrumbs you are scattering. All very evocative but happily not obvious how they come together. Machiavelli, hatred of farmers, golden worms created by the remnants of twisted creatures who are driven to create some sort of messianic hero out of human corpses. The MCs name is synonymous with Logos. Lots of Old Testament fire and brimstone. Really wonderful balance of religious allusions without collapsing the adventure story of it all. Great job.

MorningDawn

I think it's been pretty good! With the hat and the aversion to alcohol, I pictured him looking like he was following something like a middle eastern religion - Show don't tell. It's been the same with the dream sequences, took me a while to get there, but it was better than having it spelt out right at the beginning

Macronomicon

Each part of this madness place was an inescapable regret. Was a lingering, ongoing pain. It was horror. It was despair. It was Hell or a small corner of it. --> Feels like home. TFTC

hmDrake

Yep, he's doing the equivalent of wearing a yarmulke everywhere.

Nonnyor Business

The hat and the attitude. I have done a bad job portraying it so far, but he comes off as rigid and disciplined compared to the locals.

costochondritis

first he gets cockblocked by the mind control from the system, now he gets cockblocked by his childhood trauma and aversion to alcohol sigma male grindset edit: how does everybody just look at him and know that he's a "desrin"


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