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Sky Pride Chapter 35- First Journey Through the Sky

🕑 Added 2025-03-16 16:00:18 +0000 UTC

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BWolfe1311

I have this problem as well… Should we contact author?

John Doe

The patreon says we can read 5 chapters ahead but only 3 is allowed. Anyone know how to unlock the other two chapters?

Lazerus56

my favorite. so instead of a gaggle it's a sect of cultivators..... gotta be more words for it. 4 a war. 5 an invasion 6 a calamity 7 a apacolypse

Marcia McGinley

Just rereading - so good! But I noticed this - the Temple and Covenant split up - should Covenant be Convent?

Nonnyor Business

That does sound like something I need to fix, yeah. Spell checker can't do all the work, etc. I'll get on it.

Monadologist

*to your berth

Veridescent

Hm well I wont lie, now thinking about both casual skyship adventurers in such a place, maybe a kind of ecological exploration expedition with actual benefits to cultivation and full on naval atmospheric ship warfare. So many possibilities

Shotcamelot

I'd go even farther, it could use a sentence or two describing how long they were on the ship and the disembarking process

Leaf

Also used covenant instead of convent one time I saw.

JTP

One cultivator is a menace, two an argument, three a conspiracy and four a war. This has me in stitches.

Deathly_God

Minor thing, could you add some _____ or something to indicate the time skip in the middle of the chapter? One second he's eating his fasting pill, the next he's being attacked by sand and being yelled at.

MrHrulgin

But notably also used it correctly between those two instances.

Kelsey

Ty for the chapter! As a note, you used "birth" twice when I think you meant "berth".


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