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🕑 Added 2018-10-14 14:21:30 +0000 UTC what should i add in the last balloons? and how's the english, everything alright?
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Also, just noticed: “pathetic” not “patethic”
I really like this as well. At the moment Amy has no lines, and this gives him one.
I think Amy will take fem pronouns. It's his wife after all! The wife is always right! My suggestion: Clara: "you know what's nice? Having the biggest tits in the room." Amy: "you know what sucks? Having a smaller dick than two girls..."
Spelling and grammar things: Panel 2: Emily not Emily Panel 4: “It looks” not “it’s looks”. Also I think Amy still uses he/him pronouns not she/her, but you should probably check with Humanboi on that. Panel 6: “I think Amy likes you”, not “I think Amy like’s you” Panel 9: “Emily have you ever” not “Emily do you ever” Panel 12: “Amy can fuck you” not “Amy cam fuck you” Otherwise, it’s perfect. I think it’s exactly what we wanted.
