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Chapter 208 - The Pain of Falijmali
🕑 Added 2025-05-04 17:24:09 +0000 UTCThe next day, Mirian returned to Najwa’s Artificing Shop. It was early morning, so there were no customers. Najwa was carefully disassembling a scrapped spell engine. From the dozens of glass vials spread out on the table, Mirian guessed she was extracting magichemicals from glyphs, a laborious process that she’d never bothered with because she never had to deal with a scarcity of resources or money.
“You again,” Najwa said, not setting down her tools.
“Too often, I’m blind,” Mirian said. “You can’t really earn trust without giving trust. And when you get hurt by something, it’s hard to expose the wound. Better to keep the tender parts hidden.”
The artificer looked at her. “Most people start with, ‘hello, I’d like to buy something.’”
“Everyone has their own motivations, bubbling beneath the surface. Me, I just want to save Enteria,” she said, spreading her arms wide and smiling. Then her gaze grew stern. “But people like you have seen that everyone pretends to be a kind soul, especially the sinister ones. The most abhorrent ones grip their masks the tightest.” She thought of Westerun, pretending to be only interested in the health of his patients. “The problem is, when you’ve been betrayed by enough people wearing masks of kindness, you stop trusting kindness. And then the world is a little less bright.”
Najwa’s suspicious gaze hadn’t lessened. “You should leave,” she said.
“The brass smugglers’ cases are behind a false wall in the closet. It’s the best hiding spot of all the artificer shops, I think, because a diviner might think it’s just the plumbing. At least fifty doubloons worth of material goes south each month. An incredible amount, given the poverty of the town. What I can’t figure out is what you all get in return.”
The other woman had grown stiff. She had her hand by her belt, next to her wand.
“I’m looking for Atroxcidi, of course. But I need him not to know this yet, because the Prophet Ibrahim has already manipulated him.” Najwa was about to talk, but Mirian raised a finger. She summoned her soulbound spellbook and opened to one of the pages in the middle. “In three days, you plan to add two grams of silvophus, eight grams of sparkleberry extract, and three grams of wintersap to the brass case. But the myrvite migrations spotted south of here will delay the caravan. It never gets sent.” She closed the book and dismissed it.
Najwa had taken a step back. “What are you?” she whispered.
“A Prophet. Chosen. Whatever you call them. I don’t know how to fix the world yet, but this I do know: it is only by understanding truth that we have a chance.” She spread her arms wide again. “So I’ll ask again. What truths do you hold? Why is Falijmali like this? What history do you and the necromancer share? Was he your ally in the Unification War? Or does he threaten the town with ruin if you don’t obey? What do you know of him?”
The artificer was still silent.
“I’m still not being honest, am I?” Mirian took in a deep breath and closed her eyes. Her voice became a whisper. “I was taken from my birth parents. I don’t know who they were, only that I would have lived my life here, in Persama, had Baracuel not stolen me away. They didn’t just steal the children, though. They cursed them so they’d forget having ever lived here. That curse still lingers.”
She opened her eyes in time to see Najwa’s face shift through a dozen different emotions. There was still that fear, still disbelief, but there was horror, too—and sorrow. Najwa stepped back as if hit by force blast, and tears started running down her face. “One of the lost,” she whispered. “We wondered why they never returned… wondered where… Gods above.”
Mirian found that her own eyes were moist too. These others will never remember the time together we had, but somewhere in the world, there is always someone who understands.
***
This time, when Najwa went to talk to the people she knew, it was a new story about Mirian. She hadn’t had to explain Ibrahim all that much, but that the man had seemingly stolen away their necromancer was a point of friction. It was after all, their tribute that let him build his undead army.
That was good. Mirian hadn’t wanted to hunt down and kill anyone trying to contact Ibrahim like she had with the prince’s riders.
“So you don’t need us anymore?” Numo asked.
“No.” She slid a pouch packed with gold and silver across the table. “That’s enough coin for you to live in luxury. I wouldn’t recommend leaving town for some time, though. There’s myrvites swarming to the south, and more leviathans and other sea beasts surfacing in the East Sound.”
“Hmm.” Numo shrugged. “If it was just information you needed, why didn’t you just torture them?”
Mirian recoiled. The thought of what Specter had done to her flashed through her mind. “No,” she said.
“Well, whatever. Might be faster next time to do that, though.”
He and Ravatha left, heading down the block towards their favorite restaurant, Mirian assumed. She had tracking glyphs hidden on their things. Numo knew this; Ravatha didn’t. Either way, she’d know if they suddenly tried running west.
Arenthia sighed. “I’m glad you draw that line,” she said. “The Deeps… tortured a lot of people.” The way she said it, Mirian knew she’d seen it done. Maybe even done it herself. “It did sometimes work. Rarely. Most of the time, they just told us whatever they thought we wanted to hear. The other times, we never intended to get information. Just to send them back to their people, broken, as a warning. Nothing good will ever be built on a foundation so full of pain. And no mortar will ever patch the fissures. Zolomator watch over you.”
“They are. I’m sure of it,” Mirian said.
Mirian then went to her meeting. She and Arenthia split up. What she’d said to Numo and Ravatha in public was a lie; they would still be on the lookout for spies and informants. As Arenthia had noted, though, anyone listening thinking they were no longer associated would make their job easier. Arenthia would be on the lookout for anything too obvious, and had a small device Mirian had made that let her use remote whisper at some distance. The priestess had some experience in using mana for devices, and that was all that was required. Like a wand, the spell just needed mana shoved at it, nothing that required any control.
Najwa met her in one of the plazas, then they took a circuitous route to an unremarkable building. In the basement was what she recognized as an old bathhouse, but one of the chambers had been repurposed for meetings. “How old is this?” she asked, looking around.
“At least two thousand years. It was built sometime during the Persaman Triarchy. We resisted them too,” Najwa said proudly.
The meeting was kept small to avoid attracting attention. The other woman in the room was Thaseem. Mirian knew her as one of the guards of the city, but apparently she was much more. Najwa had been sparse on the details until they were in a secure location.
Mirian summoned her spellbook, going down her list of common divination spells to check. “I detect nothing, and my companions haven’t contacted me either.”
Thaseem nodded. She would have done her own checks. Mirian had caught at least one of the other guards casting a quick divination spell as they’d approached the building. “Najwa tells me time is not the same for you. And Prophets don’t work quite like the histories report.”
“It isn’t,” Mirian said, and briefly described the situation. For Ravatha and Numo, she’d left out just how proximate the end of the world was. For these people, she’d told them the truth. “So. Tell me about the Junudasun,” she said. That was what Najwa had called the organization.
“It’s quite simple,” Thaseem said. “At the end of Unification, Baracuel promised to let us live in peace. It then broke that promise, not once, not twice, but eight times. Twice, it sent the navy to our port and bombarded our town. Another time, it had our Council assassinated and replaced by those more friendly to it. Oh, they lie and say it was the separatists who did the deed, or had some fig leaf of justification for their attacks, but we know the truth of things. Always, it acts as a redmire serpent coiled around our necks, fangs sunk in deep, and no amount of blood will satiate it. Our ancestors, when they made peace, forgot a lesson they should have known: that empires don’t accept limits.”
Mirians head spun. “Eight times?” She’d never heard of that. Madinahr was across the sound from them. Surely such things should have been in their textbooks. But by now, she could recognize the truth. Of course Baracuel wouldn’t want the worst of its excursions being well known. It had a reputation to uphold.
Thaseem continued. “And they continue to send their agents. For a time, Falijmali was content to let the serpent strangle them. But even the blood and silver they sucked from this land wasn’t enough. When we organized an attempt to get them to follow the Unification Treaty, they unleashed a campaign of terror and violence. It was the necromancer who came to our aid. Shortly after, they resorted to kidnapping. Two dozen children, ripped from their families. They were never seen again.”
“Gods’ blood,” Mirian said.
“Until now,” Najwa said. Her eyes were pricked with tears again. “I was one of the mothers they stole from.”
A thousand emotions ran through Mirian. “I think… the memory is so fragmented. But I think I remember my mother dying.” She swallowed. “I don’t remember what happened to my father. The memory curse… it’s withering away. Slowly. But it’s still there. Sometimes I get flashes. Fragments. And the harder I think about it, the harder it is to remember.”
Najwa wiped the tears from her eyes. “We’ve put out a quiet call to see if—but it is unlikely. To be Junudasun is to live a dangerous life. Most of those who had children taken from them are dead now.”
Mirian felt crushed. Briefly, she’d allowed herself to feel hope that at least her real father was still alive. She suppressed it. Focus. Still, the horror of it all needled her. “What is here that they want so badly?”
“The dream of the leeches up north is to build another train line that circles south along the wastes. There’s said to be huge, untapped quarries of foss. Both Akana and Baracuel have their greedy eyes on it.”
Follow the energy, she heard Nicolus saying in her mind. Is that really what this is about? More fossilized myrvite? That’s worth destroying families over? She felt the rage within her growing. She suppressed that, too. Now was not the time.
“Tell me about Atroxcidi,” she said.
“You’re pronouncing it wrong,” Thaseem said. “It’s ‘Atrah Xidi.’ It’s Old Adamic. Means—”
“—Star’s Breath,” Mirian finished. “You know, that makes a lot more sense. Otherwise it sounds, uh. Well. A bit more sinister, to anyone who speaks Friian.” Though it sounds more like a title than a name. It would be a sort of silly name.
Thaseem snorted. “Hmm. Of course. Where to begin? We don’t see him. There’s a smuggler’s drop three days south. We give him supplies. Sometimes he supplies us with things. Wands. Protection amulets. Useful artifacts. But we don’t see him, and he doesn’t see us. For both of our protection. He’s been building that army of his for… some time. That was to be our leverage to break from this stalemate and gain our independence back. Though I suppose, if Akana and Baracuel are to go to war with each other…”
“Everything will change. Old alliances will shatter. The world will need to be rebuilt.” She felt that rage stirring in her again. “Falijmali deserves better. I will make sure it gets it,” she declared. It was a rash thing to say, but she was committed. “Still, I need to be prepared. The stories of the Unification War… they don’t paint him as particularly nice. But Atrox—sorry, Atrah Xidi takes to negotiation well?”
Thaseem nodded. “He has his desires. And he’s certainly no paragon of benevolence. He is a true necromancer, and that means dealing in death. No one’s hands were clean, though, after your Unification War. All war is terrible. Brings out the worst of humanity. But when given the choice of perish or fight, we fight.”
“As you should,” Mirian said. Gabriel, you’re wrong, she thought. Nothing goes back to being stable after this. The current order is untenable, even without the impending doom. Everywhere I visit, there’s tensions bubbling beneath the surface. Unresolved conflicts. Competing interests. Social contradictions that will erupt like so many leylines. There was such complexity to the political situation of the world, but when she constructed a simplified model of it, she thought she understood the general brushstrokes now. Liuan’s wrong too. Akana Praediar may be able to militarily dominate Baracuel and Persama, but after its armies have come through, it’ll be left with a bloody land that will resist its grip with every fiber of their being. Conquest is not so simple as winning battles.
“What are the things he wants?” Mirian finally said.
“His true end goals? We don’t know. Only that he’s willing to help us break the bloody chains of Baracuel. Who else will come to our aid? There is no one else.”
“Rambalda?”
Thaseem spat on the ground. “No different than Baracuel. Their only problem is who’s in charge of the empire.”
And then there’s the nuances, Mirian thought bitterly. Old rivalries and hatreds she knew nothing about. She would need to learn them. For Enteria’s sake.
***
Mirian and Thaseem waited until dark. The Junudasun had a shadow government that had a great deal of influence in the town, but official control of the city still sat with a council that was loyal to Baracuel, and plenty of soldiers and merchants marched to their orders. Thaseem knew the guard shifts, though, and as the last vestiges of twilight faded, easily arranged for them to slip out the gates.
Once out, Mirian flew them south. She already knew the route to the first stop thanks to Ravatha.
“Gods above,” Thaseem swore when they landed. “I didn’t know mages could levitate this fast!”
“Most can’t,” Mirian said. “The drawback is the mana it burns. And unlike an airship, I can’t just load more fuel in. Well. Not quite.”
Mirian powered up the enchantments at the site so they could sleep in safety. Then, in the morning, Thaseem had them de-power the glyphs fully. “Inactive glyphs are much harder to detect. I doubt anyone will look, but best to stay cautious.”
The next morning, they flew out. Mirian completed the rest of what was normally two full days of riding in a few hours, killing a few myrvites along the way for mana.
“There,” Thaseem shouted over the wind. There was a formation of red and black striped rock—sedimentary, Mirian was pretty sure—and a small cave. Upon close inspection, one could see the faint outlines of where heavy cases had sat.
“That’s it?” Mirian asked.
“That’s it.”
Mirian looked around. They were surrounded by boulders, spires, mesas and rock formations she couldn’t guess the name of. Here and there, she could see sinkholes leading underground to a network of treacherous caves. South of them, there was a plateau that was broken up by jagged canyons, and beyond that, bare lumps of mountains scattered across the desert. The winds were relentless. In the distance, she could see twisters of sand spiraling across the wastes.
“Any idea where his minions come from?”
“No,” Thaseem said. “They only come out after we’ve left. And we’ve never been foolish enough to try tracking them.”
Mirian nodded. Well, she thought. Time to continue searching.
Comments
Elayda
Does anyone remember what chapter Mirian’s Father’s ring is brought up? Edit: They were G.N. so probably not Atrah Xidi
Kevin O'Malley
It’s been bugging me for a while, why is the liche named atrocity, how does spellcheck let atroxity be written?
Amadhe
A weird time to say this, but I’m a forgetful person, and I’m not sure if I’ve said it before, so I’ll say it now. This is a masterpiece of a story. I eagerly anticipate the release of each chapter and I as soon I finish it, I yearn for the next one. There are many great stories I’ve read, but very few where I’m so strongly hooked, like a moth flying towards a flame. 🔥
Mountainking
Wow. I never picked up on the name being pronounced "atrocity"
FuriousDee
I like how you shifted the neceomacer’s name from basically being ‘really bad event’ to an actual name to show that he is a person to. Also I wonder if Dawn’s Peace also cares more about who is in charge of the empire than if there is one.
Mr NerfGun
It was Niluri. She used that name as a pseudonym once with the thought that her father used to call her that. Except it was a Persaman name.
Mr NerfGun
Or she could simply show them. Take them to Torriviol when everyone is being massacred. Take them to the people suffering. Make them listen to their pain. Take them to those oppressed by the powerful. It would be quite enlightening I believe.
FuriousDee
So given the lack of connection between this town and Atari Xidi and how they have to hide there association even in town, I think Mirian wasn’t from here because she wouldn’t have had an undead cat living in a town like that. Additionally it sounds like this happened in multiple places. I basing this off of how Westrun has killed at least a hundred people continuing his work. So he probably killed a similar number of people while creating the first stage and as that stage needed a malleable mind he would have had to work on children. So I suspect that for at least some of the lost the reason they never return is because Westrun killed them to refine his curse. I suspect Mirian was a child much closer to Atrah Xidi if not his own and is serving as a hostage to prevent him from attack Baracuel and that she was the original target they needed the improved curse for so that she didn’t die leading to a revenge driven invasion. The other children are just missing not hostages but we know there was at least one hostage. I do wonder if her name was originally Mirian.
Metal(Liz)ard🏳️⚧️
Mirian being the seemingly only one able to step back and see the whole picture is so fascinating. Eventually i feel she will have to remove the other loopers if only because their plans wont work and may interfere with her own to save the planet at least in her opinion
FuriousDee
She didn’t say her mother died in front of her just that she remembered her dying she could remember her being gone later. Besides she clearly isn’t one of theirs if the town is hiding their association with the necromancer even in the town and she was being truthful about how they have minimal contact with him there will be no little girls with an undead cat running around. Besides it sounds like this happened in multiple towns.
Mundane
The complexity and debth to the world building in this story never fails to impress me. I have read many "orphan" protagonist stories but none of them weave in politics and clandestine services the-ends-justify-the-means along with a slow reveal that shapes the characters growth and brings out actual emotion. <3 <3 <3
Griffus
With only two dozen children and knowing that her mom died in front of her before she was kidnapped or at the same time It shouldnt be that difficult to know who her parents were, najwa should at least know them
