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Chapter 209 - Mayat Shadr

🕑 Added 2025-05-07 17:48:48 +0000 UTC

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Amadhe

A fellow victim of Autocorrect I see, it always wants to correct Mirian to Miriam 🤣

RainbowCatTopHat

Honestly I should have guessed, after all; nobody truly wants the world to end. Yet something about seeing Atrah Xidi who's been built up as this legendarily evil figure doing everything possible to attempt to prevent the end of the world was surprising and humanizing.

Mr NerfGun

It's just a general take on his power. He has probably theorized doing what he did before for some reason or another. Like nuking an enemy nation. Would the Preatorians even be able to defend themselves against his soul gathering spell?

Anotherb Account

Such a good way to meet him after all this time, great chap.

marten

Oh god, that'd be scary!

marten

Another awesome chapter! The scene with the guard was just gold! And then Jei and Seneca! I also can't wait for her to meet Atrah Xidi. If he is weeping there, maybe he was a citizen of the Persaman Triarchy? But then he'd be so old, then he would be so scary powerful.

Mr NerfGun

After seeing what Atrah Xidi can do, I can only think that the Preatorians are suicidal.

Robert Mullins

Nah, if he was a time looper he would have stopped trying to hold back the moon after the first couple times.

DB

It appears quite likely that Atrah Xidi is also a time looper now (although still slightly possible he instead managed to extract the detailed knowledge demonstrated)

Metal(Liz)ard🏳️‍⚧️

Oh boy if Mirian scared the others before she's gonna be way scarier after she learns from him. 200 myr sustained minimum is insane

Mr NerfGun

The flames look to me as if their star had died and expanded to cover the planet. Maybe the Divir moon is a giant shield generator fueled by the leylines? And given some of the Gates spewed fire but Entaria wasn't annihilated, it may be that some of them were in space and were engulfed too.

Mr NerfGun

I love how you write. The way you conveyed the grander of it all really did send a feeling of awe.

Enthernal

That was an absolutely awesome chapter. I like how a number of pieces fell into place and it somehow feels natural that she first sees Atrah Xidi by pure happen stance rather then as a result of tracking him down. I feel it matches the nature of the timeloop wonderfully. I think this chapter also confirms my theory that there has to be more to the moon. I hope Miriam makes the connection that the moon just so happens to crash in a huge, empty circle in the middle of mayat shadr. A city where according to the old note from a previous prophet the mausoleum was supposed to be, but could not be found. Maybe because something caused it to be lifted all the way to outer space? I can't wait to see things get moving again. Keep up the work!

FuriousDee

That is a really well done Archmage. I am looking forward to their meeting.

Robert Mullins

What I suspect will happen is she will find that if she can keep a cycle going long enough she will hit the flames and as the flames grow they will keep coming earlier and earlier, giving her a deadline. After all, has ominian shown a single image of the moon fall to her? I don't think that's the end game. I think it's just the next stage of her training.

Robert Mullins

I wonder if it will occur to her soon that the flames aren't necessarily only in the past. Elder gods don't treat time as a line, so why would elder God level threats?

Pete Magnuson

I wonder if Ominian gets to enjoy the glimpses of some things the prophets see too. I think They'd appreciate the awful beauty of the end, and the hope that it's not really the final end.

Anonymous

Friday chapter please?


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