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Chapter 253 - Discussing Dreams

🕑 Added 2025-10-05 17:08:48 +0000 UTC

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Kevin Mendoza

dialectic, did you mean the word "dialogue"?

Rico Anthony

Persama are ready for it, but that’s also because of the boot of empire on their neck. boot of *an* empire?

UraniumPhoenix

I added a section just after the first section break, just prior to the expedition leaving. It reads: At nights, she and Zhuan explored the dream. However, the experiments Zhuan had planned couldn’t be run. They could both consistently visit a location within it, but from what they could tell, time wasn’t always synchronized. They couldn’t simply decide to visit each other. She’d hoped they’d unlocked a simple tool, but this too would take practice to master. If it can be mastered, and it isn’t all at the whim of the Ominian, that is. <-Patreon comments can't handle italics

Mundane

I <3 that Gaius has the most nuanced view here. I also appreciate that the other views are not done in such a way that one is obviously right or one is obviously wrong. Real ideological conflict is messy while most online fictional portrayals of it are obvious author self inserts to try and influence the reader. Very well done :)

Michael Vonica

Even better, Ibrahim can already cast raw arcane spells using only Dervish forms. Go all in on investigating if raw healing magic can be cast with Dervish forms as well. I'm surprised no one has mentioned this in story yet.

Enthernal

I just realized, but here's a possible way out for Myriams conundrum of telling Ibrahim about relicarium and the 9th binding. First she guided him towards soul magic to talk with his wife. Now she's keeping an eye out that he continues to advance his soul magic. She could slowly get him started on the first bindings while she observes him further. It'll give her at least a bit more time, and she can say she always intended to aid him in saving his wife, but was taking this carefully, both for herself and to not give him false hope.

Touch

Edit *They circuitous route* They took to Their past death may have taken them through a specific future They were looking for that we haven’t seen yet. The circuitous route

RainbowCatTopHat

Time to mess with time a little. Man I'm excited to see how their attempts to contact previous prophets go.

UraniumPhoenix

Hmm. Thanks for the feedback, I'll consider how I can change things to feel a bit more satisfying.

chumponimys

Feels a little weird to have the scene end on "Let's start practicing tonight." and then a timeskip forward a week with no mention of how those are going. I'm sure we'll hear more later, but as a reader it feels uncomfortable. Even if we only get a single sentence in the first paragraph or two of the timeskip just about how Mirian is feeling about those trainings, that'd at least give us some closure for now.

Alexander Dupree

So I was going to ask if it might be possible to talk with the past and looks like they’re going to try. Also fun fact Gaius said the prophet from his time said only 2 had returned. Wonder if they’re all in the same branch still moving together under O’s dreamscape

Morog T Tiny

thank you for this story

KooZnack

Thanks for the chapter!


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