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Story: New Job
🕑 Added 2024-02-29 22:30:35 +0000 UTCHey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a b
Hey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a bar... and the events that ensue. You can read it as a downloadable PDF here in the attachments.
Bear with me, I'm not sure how to go about posting stories here on Patreon, so if the attachment doesn't work/is inelegant, I can try a different format down the road.
Comments
Swell Reads
I like the story and dialogue, but feel like the formatting could use more spicing up. Single-spaced black text on a white background can be hard on the eyes. ๐ฅด Personally, I separate each paragraph with a line break and will sometimes put a 'faded' version of the image as the background. Not saying to do *exactly* that, but presentation is equally as important as the actual story itself IMO
Noti
Reading now, and hoping to someday get my own banger story from you!
Victor89
Always good to see writing from you.
JustAFallenWaffle
Thank you so much for taking my comm! This story is FANTASTIC!!
JustAFallenWaffle
You GET it!! ๐ค
Silver Gold
The GOAT of bloat at it again with another banger! Love it when you post stories, you always knock it out of the park
Sallem
Love the picture cant wait till I get home to see
