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MM - Chapter 49 - TO KILL A MOCKING BITCH

🕑 Added 2025-01-03 15:58:48 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

My main problems with it are: 1) It seems like the easy way out, like instead of Mel being attracted to the random dude who beat up thugs in her alley, she gets intrigued by being able to hear his thoughts. Or instead of having an organic character interaction between him and this corpo princess, she hears tantalizing future knowledge and needs to get closer to him to find out more. In both cases, there are already built in plot lines that could lead to these women WANTING to know him, but an unexplained and apparently "new" (as in, not from the future) magical mechanic does all the work. 2) the arbitrary way it works. He has thoughts they don't pick up on, they only hear the perfect thought to woo the character (or whatever the dating game terminology would be). So like, some omnipotent hand of fate is making sure Woman 2 doesn't hear a thought that'd turn her off, or anything that'd negatively impact our MC Oh also, I just don't like harems.

BookDragonling

Okay this mind reading thing is getting a bit annoying. Let's get some actual explanation about why this is happening because as of right now I can only assume it's a really forced way to 'foreshadow' his likely future harem.

guillaume nguyen

IIRC. Raine met her in chapter 7. Come on, let's save her too. Also, seems Raine has a fate with freckles ^^

Seth

You really went for it with the chapter title. Props.

Maverickblade22

Definitely not the best, remindeds more of the stupid romance visual novel games on steam. Maybe less focus on the girl (not an artist so just spitballing)? Love all the other art though, still cant get over how good the last few pictures of jiran and co's armor

Maverickblade22

Right? If i remeber right the 1st girl initial mentioned something about being taken away by the government as a psychic as if it was a kind of mutant thing but this girl doesnt know whats going on so maybe raine is just broadcasting unknowingly to attractive women?

Tim Johnson

im genuinely curious as to the reason so many of these women are able to hear his thoughts. what freak portion of his return to the past caused this.....

JTP

picture in this chapter... Remade it 4 times and still not completely happy with it. Sigh. That said, editing pass cracked me up, <3 Morty.


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