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MM - Chapter 59 - THE AUCTION BEGINS

🕑 Added 2025-01-17 15:31:35 +0000 UTC

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_mori

Ah so the reason why they haven’t bought up SoulGen is because her uncle is making a ruse out of it, deceiving their own family

guillaume nguyen

Hmm, trying to hook in Telera would be too dangerous for now, considering her background, and having female relationships outside of romantical ones always refresh a story more than 'collecting every girl ever described in the novel'. I always felt such novels are bland and dumb. Having multiple girls is nice, as long as they're properly fleshed out and not a carbon Thot copy. Women have intelligence and personality, there's not just a body, many bad authors forget that and I hope you won't make the same mistake. Freckles are nice though. ....Sorry for the rant *cough cough*

guillaume nguyen

I hope this telepathy thing won't stay one way forever. Letting Raine and the girls deeply understand each other at such a level would increase their loyalty and affection, without even talking about their knowledge, teamwork and danger detection. With that said, it would be better to have it bloom after their relationships is solidly established, since Celeste initial impression is not that great at the moment.

JTP

Every rating helps make sure the story can live on! Can't keep writing if it doesn't keep the family fed >< Didn't realize until my bank account relied on them just how important they are... Glad you're enjoying the story so much! It's loosely based on one of my favorites of all time: Rebirth of The Strongest Sword God. Should check it out and give Lucky Old Cat some much needed love. That guy didn't get the recognition he deserved for creating such a novel world back then.

John

Made my day with the large chappie upload!!! Loving this book. I have a note for myself to leave some reviews for you on royal road this weekend. Keep them coming good sir 🫡


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