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MM - Chapter 72 - FRESH START
🕑 Added 2025-02-06 18:46:19 +0000 UTCDevastated, Fizgore sat up, holding his head in his hands. Ecstatic to be getting such great ammunition for later, Raine was quick to rub salt in his old friend’s emotional wounds, “Amazing how many guys fell for this trap. Didn’t you think this place was odd when you found it?”
A full-body twitch was followed by Fizgore’s head slowly rotating to face him, “I… wasn’t alone? It can’t be true. S-she was selling tofu this whole time?! My chest, it aches. My pure dao heart is cracking. How could she do this to me?”
Raine shook his head sadly, his voice dripping with sympathy, “That’s just how those creatures are. So long as you learned how to avoid their traps in the future, then the experience was worth the suffering.”
Fizgore shuddered, then spat on the floor, “Indeed! This hardship will only create a superior me! I have been blind, and now I see. Apologies, amituofo. Thank you for saving me from her lies. I will seek the wisdom that lurks on this path to Diyu. However, my wits are not what they should be in this place. Would benefactor be willing to point me in the direction of the exit? I thirst for fresh air.”
“Here, put these on first,” wearing an easy smile, Raine passed Fizgore a pair of level zero tunic and pants.
Used to the flickering glow from the dimly burning incense, Fizgore deftly received the clothes. Holding them to his chest, he bowed low, “What an upright soul amituofo has. Courtesy demands reciprocity. Though I may be impoverished now, my fortunes will surely blossom thanks to your generosity.” Instead of equipping both items, Fizgore proved he was exactly the man Raine remembered by only wearing the pants, leaving his powerfully muscled torso on full display.
Yup, same old Fizgore. Goofy bastard.
Falling back on fond memories, Raine was quick to shoot back, “A fish needs two chances to flourish, while a man only needs one.”
Fizgore laughed heartily, filling the den with honest joviality, “I didn’t know it was possible to butcher a proverb so horrifically and still relay the essence of its wisdom. You are a strange one, amituofo.”
Raine waved him off, leading the way down the tunnel toward the ladder, “Enough with that. Call me brother. I’m no saint.”
“Very well, brother. If you’re not here for kindness, then what brought you to this lair of deception?”
“I heard a rumor in Dry Canyon Town. I came to test myself against what this world considers demons. I also took the chance to level my companions along the way,” Raine’s enunciation was a warning that Fizgore didn’t miss.
Following through with his cheesy imitation of a monk, Fizgore cupped his fists, “They must be important to you. I shall hold them in the same regard you’ve shown me.”
Almost forgetting it was necessary to ask, Raine nodded to his old friend, “And what should I call you? Brother?”
“This humble one should be referred to as Fizgore. Until my debt is repaid. Then, I will be worthy of being your brother.”
“As you wish,” Raine acknowledged. Just before reaching the ladder, they were bombarded by hysterical wailing from above. Raine quickly reached the top and poked his head into the common room. The man he’d killed in the den was on his knees. He held one of the succubus bones to his forehead, snot leaking from his nose.
[Human - Unclassed: Level 4 (HP 108/108)]
Fizgore poked out behind him, beholding the naked, freshly resurrected man, “Does he think he can hear her voice through a bone?”
Raine snorted, walking into the room, “No. Some people can't handle the mental strain and become hopelessly addicted.”
The man ignored them as they walked by. Fizgore shook his head at the pitiful display, “Only the weak crumble at the loss of a warm bed. The waves crash upon the beach, the beach does not crash upon the waves!” Raine’s toes curled in an attempt to hold in his laughter.
That’s a new one. He must have conveniently forgotten it after spending another couple weeks here in the past.
Raine stepped outside and Fizgore hesitated on the threshold. He blinked repeatedly, turning away from the blinding noon brightness to gaze at a silver and gold inlaid flower pot, “Brother, are you not going to claim any of the prizes in this place?”
Unfortunately, the only decent loot escaped.
“There’s no such thing. The entire building, and everything in it, are constructs created with Demonic Power. Look at the walls, they’re already starting to fade.”
Leaning in for a closer look, Fizgore nodded with his brows raised. With a last glance inside, accompanied by a deep sigh, he followed Raine across the short clearing. The girls were much calmer than when he left them. Their fingers blazed as they shot messages back and forth.
Reaching them, Raine spoke in his no-nonsense, drill sergeant tone, “Fizgore, Melbelle, Crimson Nebula. These two are hired mercenaries.” Neither girl missed the implication that they shouldn’t use their real names. With introductions out of the way, Raine snapped an order, “No more using your fingers for messages. Use the ocular inputs. Hands should never be far from your weapons and the speed your eyes move is still lacking.”
“That’s all you have to say to us?” Celeste fumed. Raine stared her down and she quickly broke, her gaze falling to the canyon floor.
Mel closed out of her interface. She bit her lip, eyeing Raine with a glimmer of her former worry etched across her features, “You’re back. Did anything happ-were you hurt?”
“Since you have the time to worry about me, then you must be ready to train,” Raine ran at the canyon wall. He jumped and his feet touched the rocks. After running horizontally for three steps, he performed a flawless round-off to land on the ground, “Two hundred times for each of you before we reach the exit trail or the next training is doubled.”
Eyes widening at the deadly threat, Mel dashed at the wall and repeated his maneuver. Celeste’s jaw jutted forward and she growled before joining her. As Celeste was flipping off the wall, Raine dashed forward and kicked at her. Expecting it, she contorted mid-air, barely avoiding his boot and landing off-balance. As Mel was running to start her second attempt, Raine tried to shape his bloodlust and direct it only at her.
Instead of the cone he intended to create, a hemisphere of crimson energy pulsed from his skin. Pain bloomed between his ears and both girls were caught in the wave. Celeste turned in a blink, her weapons equipped and her fists up. Mel wasn’t so lucky. She stumbled a foot short of jumping and crashed face-first into the wall.
Breathing heavily with dilated pupils, Celeste berated him, “I can’t believe you used that on us! I thought I was about to die!”
Raine had used the mental ability around them several times, though never directing his killing intent toward either of them. Since they would need to get used to it before the raid, and he still needed the practice, there was no reason to hold back. “Good reaction, Crimson. Melbelle, are you going to lay down every time something comes along to kill you?”
Mel’s arms were shaking, the feeling of a thousand daggers pressed to her beck still bright in her memory. She shook her head fiercely, not yet trusting her voice as she climbed to her feet. Fizgore hadn’t been hit, but his eyes were narrowed in a thoughtful expression. When Raine strode past the girls at a brisk pace, they quickly resumed their wallhops.
Fizgore had to jog to keep up. He observed the girls’ vigorous training appreciatively, “One is fierce like a bonfire, the other soft as a petal. Your tastes are sublime and varied, brother.”
Raine nodded, crossing his arms with a scowl. He refused to allow his pleasure at their progress to reach his face where it would no doubt spoil them both, negatively affecting their training.
It’s easy to see their potential. Mel doesn’t have any bad habits to unlearn like a classically trained martial. She soaks everything I throw at her like a sponge, and her progress in adapting to attributes is about the best I’ve ever seen. Celeste is no less amazing. She’s rapidly restructuring what she’s been taught about combat to fit ZL, and that’s only the beginning. Once her attributes grow a little more, the terrifying truth of her talent will emerge.
During his ruminations, the girls barely managed to focus on their training, hiding embarrassment behind strained expressions. Fizgore continued in a chipper tone, unaware of it all, “If you live near Callipburn City, I have a friend you would love to meet. She would make a fine addition.”
Raine wasn’t about to let him off his debt so easily, “No thanks.”
The large man acquiesced with a sigh, “Indeed, matters of the heart are better left to the heavens. This method of training is… unique. My family once made me backflip from a wall, would that not be more challenging?”
Raine hid his grin, lest his old friend see the trap before falling deeper, “The point isn’t the difficulty of the maneuver. It’s maintaining momentum and responding to randomly timed threats. True combat can be thought of as motion distilled by malleable purpose. A static exercise like repeated backflips only forms bad habits.”
Fizgore’s brows drew down and he spoke in a shocked whisper,” Motion distilled by malleable purpose?” Raine gave him the time he needed. Afterall, it was Fizgore himself that taught Raine this very lesson after he’d undergone a startling revelation at the end of a difficult dungeon. In the past, there was never any doubt that Fizgore was the martial genius, and Raine merely riding his coattails.
“Would you mind if I joined them?” Fizgore’s buddhist affectations were nowhere to be found, his voice and tone now completely serious. Raine nodded. He knew this would happen, and that agreeing would only further endear the man once known as The Untouchable Wind.
Standing straight as a board, Fizgore leaned forward until it appeared he would crash into the ground. At the last instant, he bent his knees and darted forward. He reached the wall at a full sprint and kicked off the ground. He made it five steps before preparing to jump into an aerial cartwheel.
Raine blasted into the air, his attributes bringing him above Fizgore in a heartbeat. His leg lashed out at one-fifth power, catching the man right as his feet left the wall. Curling into a ball, Fizgore’s hands met Raine’s shin and the force of the blow sent him hurtling down like a spinning cannonball. Having perfectly adjusted how much power he absorbed with his arms, Fizgore landed on his feet in a tight tuck.
The girls gaped as he rose. Celeste in particular felt the sting of her cheek being slapped. [Raine’s been going so easy on us. This guy is level zero and recovered from such a fierce attack…]
Fizgore wiped the dirt from his butt after the hard landing, “You held back.”
Raine responded with a grunt, “So eager to die again?”
“No. You’re right. I’m far too weak right now. I shouldn’t have let them take all my levels,” Fizgore shrugged. His voice turned forlorn, drenched with meaning, “Though, there's a certain charm in a fresh start.”
In both timelines, Fizgore left his grandfather’s prestigious dojo in search of his own martial path. With a knowing twinkle in his eyes, Raine rested a hand on his friend’s shoulder, “Every day is a fresh start.”
“Hah! Too true, brother. Too true.”
***
Raine didn’t allow the trio to count failed attempts. Between his relentless physical and mental assaults, and the grueling pace he set, none of them managed to finish. In the same vein, he was no closer to accurately narrowing down bloodlust’s AOE.
In the past, it was well known that gaining mastery over the size, angle, and strength of one’s special abilities was merely the first step toward becoming a true class five martial. Not everyone had the capacity to materialize their killing intent into bloodlust. Some never managed it, no matter how long they lived.
Everyone was different, and there were many diverging paths along the martial trail. The development of individual mental abilities was merely another step. The only constant in mental abilities was the development of them somewhere between class four and five. If you didn’t have one by then, you never would. Even a thousand years of rigorous training couldn't cross the divide between those with talent, and those without.
This was precisely the reason class four was considered the end of the martial path for the average person. That wasn't to say those without couldn't become absolute powerhouses in ZionLine; only their prospects in reality would dry up.
Since Raine failed to develop a mental ability in the past, the boon of materializing bloodlust was a godsend. That didn't mean his progress from here forward would be smooth. It was in fact, the opposite. He had no idea how mental abilities tied into becoming a full-fledged master or grandmaster, only that it was an undeniable fact they were an integral part of the process. Additionally, his knowledge of methods to nurture his budding talent were basically nonexistent.
What Raine knew for sure was that intentional practice was the sure and steady path to advancement in all things. It was too bad repeated uses of bloodlust gave him a tremendous headache. He wasn’t about to throw in the towel so easily though. By the time they reached the trail, his vision was swimming and a stubborn trail of blood leaked from his nose no matter how many times he wiped it away.
A blaring call from Raine’s HUD was answered before the first chime could finish eviscerating his skull. His voice reflected none of the pain he felt, only excitement, “You found him?”
The young guild leader of Enders Fall nodded, his articulate words clanging through Raine’s skull, “Indeed. He was last observed near Shadow Springs Town. The local forces of Righteous had yet to subdue him as of two hours ago.” A file sharing request came through and Raine accepted it. He briefly glanced over the data, finding several reports that pertained to Rhino’s supposed activities.
Of course he’s still fighting Righteous. Since it’s now clear that Righteous and CronGate are one and the same, it's only a matter of time before Master Torune comes after me to settle our score. Here, and in reality, I’ve put a target on my back that he can’t possibly ignore.
Raine trembled at the thought. In the past, he was no match for the peak class five master. Even now, after taking ReGen and fixing the holes in his martial style, Raine knew he would die just as easily. The threat, and promise of a worthy challenge, was exactly the pressure that every cell of his body craved. The reckoning with his old master was coming, and Raine would rise to the challenge with every fiber of his being.
Since we’re already going to be such good friends, I might as well give CronGate another fatty black eye.
Raine didn’t try to keep the anticipation out of his voice, “Great. I’m sending you a datastream with the information you wanted. I suggest you send someone versed in finances to complete the quest.”
“Most excellent. It has been a pleasure conducting business with you.”
Raine ended the call, then closed one eye to stifle the throbbing in his head. He removed a tutorial shield and short mace from his inventory, tossing them to Fizgore, “Here.”
The man caught both items, equipping them straight away. With an excited grin, he banged them together three times, filling the canyon with a cataclysmic racket, “The fates are truly kind! How did you guess my weapons of choice?”
Raine’s jaw creaked with how hard he clenched his teeth, “The girls need a tank, I figured you could handle it with the way you move. I’m leaving for now. I’ve got to go pick someone up. I’ll call you three with a meeting spot when I’m done.”
Fizgore looked back at the girls, then returned his surprised gaze to Raine, “You would entrust the protection of your women to a stranger?”
Raine was well aware that Fizgore was the kind of man who repaid betrayal tenfold, while trust given was returned a hundredfold. “It’s the other way around. They’re going to keep you alive until you get a few levels back. But think whatever you want. Besides, I can tell you’re an honorable man.” Fizgore bowed, moisture building in his eyes, his chest too tight to speak.
Mel was huffing, hands on her knees from the intense training, “Why can’t we… come with you?”
“You’ll slow me down too much. If you want to stop being left out, get stronger. I expect you both to be level five by the time I’m done. Don’t pick a skill, we’ll cover your builds in detail later,” Raine handed each girl two new types of weapons in case they maxed out their attunements, then waved goodbye, “You three play nice, I’ll see you soon.”
Before they could respond, he Leaped several meters straight up. A Lunge off thin air sent him soaring to a tiny ledge where he paused just long enough to charge another Leap. Within seconds, he was at the top of the canyon where he vanished from sight.
Fizgore’s neck was craned and his jaw hung open, “Did I see that right? Did he… jump off the air?”
Nestled in a motherly aura, Celeste clapped him on the shoulder, “You’ll get used to it, little brother.”
Comments
Jason Sanders
The pace seems to have slowed down some. If we’re about to witness the entirety of the girls’ levelling to level 15, this will take ages.
Proudfeets
New favorite character GET
ImmerFertig
I love the last line. Imagining the visual of Celeste talking down to while looking up at Fizgore is funny.
guillaume nguyen
Magnificent affro. So he'll keep talking in that style ? Nice !!! Also, F to him when Raine will share his recording with the whole guild for laughs XDXDXD Wait, what about the other prisoners ? They're leaving them here to die ? Harsh. "Mel’s arms were shaking, the feeling of a thousand daggers pressed to her beck still bright in her memory." > neck “One is fierce like a bonfire, the other soft as a petal. Your tastes are sublime and varied, brother.” 'As long as they follow the Dao of Freckles and have a good heart, every girl can become a Waifu.' - Raine, probably
guillaume nguyen
Normies are always highly derogatory ; Thee who are touchers of grass.
Judah Frankel
BROS! https://questionablecontent.net/view.php?comic=1862
Maverickblade22
I think its more of they are background and were more insurance against the unexpected. He mentioned them in the intros and now the girls are just training/ leveling until they reach their destination.
EsZeus
Thanks! But Plot hole detected! Where are the 2 mercenaries suddenly? Did I misread? Or did you forget them? ^^
JTP
Another little sprinkle of world building for yah =) FYI, IRL martial ranks by name Class 1 = Normy (highly derogatory in this martial focused world) Class 2 = Disciple Class 3 = Adept Class 4 = Expert Class 5 = Master Class 6 = Grand Master Class 7 = Old Monster
