Lissa Daniels
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Chastity - The originals (part one)
🕑 Added 2024-08-03 00:24:12 +0000 UTCSo for those of you who are new, my very first Mistress Motivational was this:
This was two site iterations ago... which now makes me feel quite bad about myself. laughs
I had done captions before this, but this was the beginning of an initiative where I was trying to do one of these a week. Every Monday (I believe it was Monday), I planned to release a new week of this story, with the other motivational posters filling in periodically.
I've never been good with deadlines... sigh
This story was written with no real idea of where it was going to go. But already, by week two, I was finding myself challenged. Writing from a third-person perspective without names is tough.
What I liked about the story was how it is completely from the woman's perspective. You only have her perspective on the events, and you are witnessing both an awakening of a fetish in her but also a reality of a fetish in him... through her eyes. It's not something you see very often in this niche (there are some fun notable exceptions... as most of the fiction you read in this genre is from the sub perspective... and the wife is most definitely NOT a sub...
This brings us to the end of the first month. I felt like it was going well, but you will notice that the diary entries that started as two sentences are now full paragraphs. The characters were beginning to take the wheel of the ship. I had planned to do one more and wrap it up
As I said, characters sometimes begin to write themselves, and as I got to the end of this caption, I kind of wanted to see where it was going. Besides, who ends a story in one month and three or four days?
With deadlines now slipping, I found myself very frustrated with the format. I wanted to do more to flesh out these experiences and characters. The first draft of this caption was five times this length, and it was growing harder and harder to edit myself down to something that was not a full-fledged novella every week.
The story took shape in my brain here. This is when I began to have snippets and scenes percolate while not writing and when the planning began. I remember this caption being the beginning of my note-taking as it was getting more complex. I knew what would happen next week and the week after that. The trouble was getting it on paper.
This brought us to the end of month two. There were too many fun threads to continue before stopping, but each caption was now taking a very long time to write. They were no longer coming out every week, but I was doing well if I managed to get one out monthly. The response was fantastic. Being a subservient dressed-up Sissy in chastity enslaved to a household full of women seemed to strike a chord in my audience. What I particularly like about the narrative is that it becomes less and less about his feelings and reactions and more about the dynamic of the women, and how they use their new toy.
I should not have gone this long without talking about Ren. While I have progressed in my ability to do layout and design a bit... I wrote all of these in longhand on a yellow legal pad and then thrust it at her with a 'please make this pretty'. Undoubtedly, it would lose something in a handwritten, coffee-stained format and not have gained nearly the popularity it had.
Which brings us to the one that broke the format...
...and just like that, we introduce the cuckold component to the story. I love the image of him looking helplessly out the car window as it pulls away from the house.
But again, the format was broken. This was nowhere close to the original concept of one—to two-sentence days. Each one was growing in scope and scale.
We will pause here... and then tomorrow, I will post the rest of the original captions... before moving on to draft number two (wherein I break the format again... )
Comments
stevedore
This was always my favorite. Would love to see the rest of it, and see where it was headed to. It was very big pretty tense by the end as I recall Thanks!
Chrissy
I love, love, love the behind scenes of how this series grew and changed from your perspective over time. Thank you so much for sharing. Would love to see more of these types of posts. Super fascinating to not only see the evolution of the series, but what was driving it.
