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The Chronicles of Nimo - 01 - Storyboard p02
🕑 Added 2021-01-06 14:47:28 +0000 UTCActually these are the storyboards, with a clear difference on the first 3 panels (only 2 in the firs draft). It's rare to see me going so blank in the sketch for panel 5! I knew I'd have lots of work there so I saved it for the final sketch.
For the record, I had real troubles with it, especially his face I could not render properly and I'm still not satisfied. BUT the final rendering + the colors make the whole page work, phew!
Comments
CLX
In the first version there are 4 panels (the tiny second is upon the wide first one), in the second I added one before as the numerous balloons made the page confusing.
Thomas Polk
Okay, you two experts, I see only three panels. Fill me in, please.
CLX
Aww you're too kind to me, my friend! When I have a bad feeling or first impression with a drawing, it's hard to change it. I do like the page as an ensemble, but this panel is a fail for me. But, as long it's only me, it's okay, haha! Thanks you so much for the support, Patrick, and yes, we are our worst critic, so true!
Patrick Fillion
Always so cool to see all the stages of your beautiful pages and art, mon ami! As for your dissatisfaction with his face in panel 5, for the record, I think the final version looks pretty darn beautiful. Sometimes, we really are our own worse critics! ❤️❤️
