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The Chronicles of Nimo - Chapter 2 - p04
🕑 Added 2022-05-09 18:58:03 +0000 UTCChapter 1 start / Chapter 2 start
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CLX
Thanks for the help, well I need to re-write it first, as I see improvement, it differs already from the original script & storyboard. I din't remember it was tricky to tell a tale in the past form + what should have been done. I get back to you when I focus on the dialogues, thanks Thomas!
CLX
Oh you know what's to come, don't you?
Thomas Polk
Yes, the English needs a reworking. I can help but I would need to know the whole story concept. The words in the middle have to relate to the beginning and the end to keep the context, direction and tone.
Thomas Polk
Just an appetizer???
