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The Chronicles of Nimo #02 - p05 (storyboard)
🕑 Added 2022-05-26 19:01:01 +0000 UTCLots of differences can be spotted from the final page on this one:
- First is the lonely balloon, that I finally put at the right end corner of page 4, to give all the space to the action & the art only.
- Second, the second panel was blurry in my mind & it shows here: I had a sense of the posing I wanted as he's driving Nimo inside the cell before he's getting forced against the wall. I wanted a curvy movement, and I had to go through various references to get it!
- Third, I swiped panels 5 & 6 during the layout cause of their proportions.
Comments
CLX
Yeah, I guess it really makes sense. Sometimes I see the storyboard as a step needing improvements, that I perform along the (long!) way to the final page. And as you say you can experiment several ways to tell the story. Thank you Patrick, such a pleasure to read your views & advice on the creation!
Patrick Fillion
Seeing the dialogue balloon here absolutely reinforces your decision NOT to include it on the final, colored page. I love this storyboard version as it gives us such a cool behind-the-scenes look at this wonderful page, but it also gives us a "What if" moment with the balloon. It's a cool way to have your cake and eat it too! LOL! 😆😆❤️❤️
