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MHA - Eidolon (One Shot)

🕑 Added 2024-12-03 18:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Owen Keating

This is great and makes a great start if you ever want to continue it and good luck with whatever’s been causing you issues

Cody S.

His list of available Quirks is limited, unable to make new ones. I'm using the CYOA as a bit of a guideline to help limit his power so I don't just pull something random out of my ass. Three abilities he can swap out anytime is damned powerful and doesn't need him crafting custom made Quirks added on top. Technically, he only has two Quirks, which for an attempted Nomu is not unheard of. Regeneration on par with the USJ Nomu and Eidolon. I plan to keep it that way.

Loghead101

Ooooohhh I like this. Out of all of your MHA one shots you’ve done I think I like the premise of this one the most. No need for the meta knowledge because as much as I love the munchkin antics that happen, it takes away some agency from the story. The heroes in the know know that AfO is active far earlier than before and they have quite the powerful asset now. Said asset while obviously strong isn’t so much so that he can completely wash the opposition. The regeneration seems automatic but haveing 3 usable slots leaves a lot for experimentation. Is he stuck with the 1 or 2 hundred he has now or can he make new quirks should the need arise, because that sounds like he could just make a quirk that functions like one he’s seen. And getting Midoriya involved early leaves opportunity for a dynamic duo. Both were quirkless and now have incredible power and both have strengths that can help alleviate each others weaknesses. All in all, good one shot and if any of them have a chance at getting a proper story I hope it’s this one. Sorry to hear about home life, I hope it gets better and soon. Take care man!


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