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EG Monster Island Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2021-03-22 03:29:12 +0000 UTC

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Tom Richards

When referring to the technique to hide the tattoos, I think you need to be more specific when you refer to letting 'It' fade, are you referring to the technique to hide the tattoos or the tattoo itself because tattoos themselves do fade (but they could retain their magical potency in this case)

Nope, Beasts can have a Darkness or a Light Affinity. Invariably, if they do, they will never achieve sapience, regardless of level.

Micke Andersson

I think that the way this is written is perfect. I wouldn't even mind if Aleks became a part of it - in fact, it would be natural given the way things have evolved. And you were on to it with the first tatoo meet as well as the dinner at the King. I really hope you're not just letting it fade, because it seemed so natural. And there are no smut scenes anyway, apart from a kiss now and then. Which btw seem to have fallen by the wayside. Affection falls to affinity?

Micke Andersson

The Sloneczny Bear is described as having Light and Ice affinity, shouldn't that be Lightning and Ice?

I'm not planning on adding anymore girls to a 'harem'. Even Vaya and Jamila wasn't really planned, but I am going beyond that. And even that I'm trying to think of ways to show tension/struggle as they bond.

Eeekkkk

I really hope this book doesn't go harem and creepy teenage fantasy like some of the others.

I am starting to suspect the same

Robert Phipps Jr (Perren d'Wolff)

you know, all of the interactions makes me wonder if the princess is edging to be part of the "harem"


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