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Legacy of the M’Zee Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2022-01-08 00:41:50 +0000 UTC

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Corwin

Sounds like Aiden and everyone will need to explore the world more and see if there are any hidden or open conclaves of Elves, Harpies, and Lamia. That could be an interesting opportunity and couple of books with the meeting of the old and newer races and the dynamics of them all interacting. With such a big world you have lots of areas to explore. Even if you let Aiden relax for a few years once you complete his sage. You could keep the universe alive by using the various races

Partly its shame and partly overwhelming fear/superstition that talking about it might make it happen again. . The Craesti only lived because they ran, and ran, and ran, and then lucked out and got a way to go very far away. Every other race currently active has a similar story, though they haven't shared it with the others.

So, I had a bit of a brain fart when I wrote this chapter, and put the Chaos Beasts in too many of the images. Basically, the war happened between the elves, the lamia, and a race of harpies. The elves won, but the leaders were jerks and oppresive. In the scene where the Chaos Beasts are being summoned, I'll be adding in a lamia and a harpy, to show that the downtrodden are working with their racial enemies to destroy their oppressors. I think.

Corwin

Maybe they came over with the Chaos Beasts. But they were like they want to eat us and ran and hid. Darkness and Light were if you promise to be good you can stay. And the ones calling them in now are the Quislings who offered up family and friends.

Vayash

I'm starting to think the reason they don't talk about the disaster is shame.

I like the mention of the cross over of Earth legends. Thanks for the additional chapter!

Corwin

The weave of fire and wood looks to be intriguing as well the formations. Almost need to make a rubbing of the formation and spend time looking how someone could create that fire and wood weave be handy if you go exploring the inner sea and other oceans and rivers

Corwin

Love the additional races depicted

Corwin

Thank you for the chapter


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