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Essence Wave Book 2 Chapter Ten

🕑 Added 2022-01-10 04:13:59 +0000 UTC

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Tim Murray

I agree a map of the world would be great. Plus it will show just how little of the world they have explored since they learned how large the planet was in Craesti City.

Corwin

Maybe some maps of the world. I read somewhere you had some software that you wanted to use to create it? I would take a chapter less a week to see how your vision would look like. Final scene from Azyal Academy of Sia blasting the assassin with a fireball. And saving Aiden. Aiden creating his crystals with his parents, Vaya and Narwan. The Worm vs Aiden. Let's see Aiden become Luke Skywaker 😆 🤣 😂 Aiden and his teammates creating their defenses for the Beast waves in Craseti City. To be honest I am willing to take anything you want to hand out

Corwin

The cold and hot mixture is a nice touch. Though probably leads to making an ice house or fridge. Definitely needed if people aren't big into smoke houses and salting meat. And Colorado you have less salt mines so lots of smoked meat would get old. Smoke house would probably need to be worked on as well. Herb hut will be sending lots of things out quickly with soaps, cooking and alchemy. Maybe an obstacle course for David and the miltia to use for training. Use it to enhance skill usages and training

Corwin

A chapter a week is fine if you get bogged down from life or work. So don't stress about the writing. You do good work. And thank you for the chapter


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