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A Primer on Gathering

🕑 Added 2022-10-16 21:14:41 +0000 UTC

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Jacob Meyers

This is really cool and very informative. I seen other books do it but it might be helpful to add this to the index of the back of the book. Since I'm assuming you want to keep some of it a surprise, you could add just up to where Aiden is in his gathering level or maybe the next step as well. And just labeled at the end "to be continued". I also liked how you gave it a publishing date. Maybe this should be something Aiden finds amongst his rewards from the Zone of Fire or M'Zee Zone. Whatever you want to call it. He does receive that Hut and we've talked about it in the past on the comments about how he could store things in there and then just stuff it in his new ring. It wouldn't be all that surprising to find out that the Hut had a library.

Okay, fixed now. Lol

I think it's supposed to say "After advancing," but I'm stumped how autocorrect would chose fav cong as what to fill in :-D

What is this supposed to be "After fav cong"? It's near the middle. Really like this.


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