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EG Book 7 Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2023-01-02 05:23:39 +0000 UTC

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Micke Andersson

"Alkes looked at her sharply" - she's called Aleks :)

Jacob Meyers

I do love that cookie comment. It was funny. Since you're going to make it longer anyways I would recommend mentioning that the sky surfer actually dropped an altitude. If they were flying high enough to not get the attention of the kraken, then it has to drop in altitude or that part of the story doesn't make sense. I don't know what you're planning for later on but since the others are so close to reaching seed core, it might be nice to see Ming or his (I can never remember how to spell his name) forge Aiden a temporary set of armor because his should be pretty trashed after that fight. It would also be a nice way to show that his friends are trying to be just as generous with him as he is with them. I don't know if you can craft armor above your power level, but in video games and stuff it's sometimes possible to do that and your books do you have a certain video game-esk quality to them.


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