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Test upload. Which size text do you prefer.
🕑 Added 2022-09-19 00:14:16 +0000 UTCI’m working on the dialogue for some pages right now and was wondering what you all thought of the text size in each numbered panel.
I made the test pretty representative of the text size and length you would find on a similar sized or framed panel.
you can pick more than one. If you explain your reasom that’s even better.
Anyway, expect several uploads sometime tomorrow.
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BZD
Thank you for the feedback.
Spinlock11
1: The text should probably not be so big in comparison to the person speaking it. I think either the text should be smaller or the shot should be zoomed in. 2: Good, as long as the words fit inside the bubble in the actual version of course! 3: This is fine. 4: It seems a little contradictory to have a large thought bubble over someone in such a wide shot in the first place. The text itself is a little small, but simply enlarging it would probably exacerbate the first issue. 5: Perfect, same as 2. 6: I can't really tell whats happening in this one. Is someone getting hit in the face with the ball? If that's an "ouch" then maybe the speech bubble isn't necessary. The text size is probably fine though. I am not an artist at all. Take this with a grain of salt. Hyped for the uploads tomorrow!
