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【English】A story about translation and Mao Serizawa
🕑 Added 2022-04-23 15:25:10 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
It's varia!
I am a painter who is
crazy about Mao and clit
I managed to prepare an English version,
even though I am not very good at it!
I think there are some unusual
dialogues in places.
Maybe the nuance of the dialogue is
different from what was intended.
Sorry if I made you feel bad.
I was using a translation tool,
but I had to check the grammar and
meaning to make sure I was doing the
right thing.
The first thing I thought was that it is often said that the Japanese language is difficult, but it is really true.
It is so-called onomatopoeia,
but in Japan, for example
「ドチュンドチュン♡」
tapping on the uterus,
「プシャー!!」
splash,
and others.
Furthermore, the above example is used as another onomatopoeia in some situations.
Then it finally doesn't make sense, does it?
I thought it was an onomatopoeia that we use as a matter of course, but is actually quite ambiguous and dependent on the reader.
That's part of the fun in thinking about it, though!
But I am a beginner in English! Of course I didn't know any onomatopoeia in English!
So either way, English is hard too! lol.
For example, the scene of spewing mother's milk,
Just get the message across! You can judge a picture by what it says!
therefore
milkgush!!
It was a word that might make you think, "Oh, he's not good at English!
If it's erotic, it's good!
The rest is about I'm coming.
I was very confused about what to say, because in English, I am coming, whereas in Japan I am going.
Hope this gets across too! I translated this with the feeling of.
Basically, if you take the intent straight from the picture situation, you should be fine!
【Story】
This story is, in essence, about Mao being destroyed by people who think it's a game and know nothing about it.
My past work describes how I got caught, so I would like to make that into a comic again too.
【Mao Serizawa(芹沢真央)】
I hear that the notation
SERIZAWA mao is also acceptable these days.
She is a girl from a game called Power Pro Kun Pocket.
It will make its first appearance in 7 of that series.
A member of the Heroes, born from the unconscious wish of a high school man.
The other heroes act like Japanese heroes, and gradually begin to create their own evil and act in the dark to protect their raison d'être.
And behind their backs, they began to harm the boys who created them.
But she had questions about what justice means, and the leader of the heroes thought the same thing, and he hoped she would find the answers.
Then, during a date with the protagonist, the protagonist's friend tells him about an American comic book hero.
I was impressed by their efforts not only to defeat evil, but also to help those in need, pick up trash, and in any case, to improve even the things around us.
I thought this was the answer.
But by then, as mentioned above, the heroes were doing evil and the leader said they couldn't do that, negating the answer she had come to find.
To begin with, she was disliked by all her peers except her leader.
The reason was that she was the only one who had a human form.
Other heroes only have suits like the Japanese heroes.
The suit is hollow.
That's why I did the above evil things. They also thought this was the only way for them.
And mao finds what he really wants to do.
It's about protecting the man who created these heroes, who asked me for my empty self.
And she betrays her fellow heroes and acts to protect the man, but…
Yes, this is a long story and I would like to draw it as a cartoon to explain it.
Eventually!
By the way, her name during her heroics is Black.
The name Mao Serizawa is a name I said on the spur of the moment when asked by the game's protagonist.
Black cat is a common name.
She's a girl who doesn't talk at all.
If I were to summarize the dialogue in Japanese, it would probably be less than 100 words!
Also, in 7, he smiles only 5 times, and is expressionless the whole time.
She's a creepy girl when you think about it calmly, but she's cute.
Especially, the scene where he gets himself run over to protect a kitten that was about to be run over by a truck makes me laugh!
Huh? After that?
He escaped from the hospital where he was taken and was reading a book in the park as if nothing had happened!
She's adorable.
Oh, by the way, I haven't told you what kind of game this is.
It is a baseball game, a game to train baseball players.
The main character is an ordinary boy who wants to be a baseball player.
By the way, there is another story, a game like RPG!
And Power Pro Kun Pocket 7 is a 2004 game. I was in elementary school.
It's been 18 years and I still love Mao Serizawa the best!
Also, this suit is totally my taste. I didn't wear it in the original.
【About the future】
I think the pace will be slow, but I will continue to update for the international market.
I may not be able to translate some past works completely into English, but I will try as much as possible.
Please support us!
See you next time!
Comments
Varia
Thanks for the advice! Very helpful!
abouth "gush" as sound effect, maybe "squirt" or "spurt" might be better. i am not english native so i may be wrong. still, thank you
Varia
Thank you!! I will continue to try a little more.
thank you very much. still better thab nothing
