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【18p】Sensory sharing, nipple masturbation torture　1

🕑 Added 2023-03-29 12:00:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

Varia

Thank you!

Perch

I'm always glad to help. I look forward to more translated work from you.

Varia

Oh, indeed. I have to be careful when using pronouns. Very excellent advice! I will use it in my future translations. Thanks to you for teaching me this, I appreciate it.

Perch

One thing to be careful of when using translation tools like DeepL are pronouns. They are not as necessary in Japanese as they are in English. So when the translator adds one on, it often defaults to adding "he", which is a male pronoun. For example, in the second page we have 「生意気なヒーローと聞いてるから、」while in English it's "I hear he's a cocky hero". Mao is obviously a girl, not a boy. Small errors like this are common with translation tools so it's important to be aware of them.

Varia

I am glad you like my work, thank you. I translate by using translation tools and studying English. I am not thinking of asking others to edit my work at this time. But I will try to take your advice, so if you have any suggestions, please let me know.

Perch

I love your work and I'm glad to see some English translation. Did you translate this yourself or did someone do it for you? It's a good start but could use some work. If you'd like an editor, please message me!